Current chapter-4 I guess this is the first review because this is an entirely new novel, somewhere buried under other hundreds of thousands web novels but I believe that this will not be the case because I can see a lot of potential in this novel if done correctly! ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Thought the writing is very good---Excellent, the story development and world background is not clear. But what can I expect from a novel with only 4 chapters. In first chapter I was hooked with the story, and so for other chapters. The concept of character integration seems promising but the trope of transmigrating to main character's body from a story, who couldn't concur the world and the MC is challenged to concur the world is cliche. To say it--I have read it in a Po**hwa.🤣🤣😅 Stuck in academy's eroge or something. Though, it wuld be best if you could keep consistency.👍👍👍
Let me follow you on your journey! I believe that you will touch greatness!!
Name is quite.....bad.
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Fantasy · RighteousShadow
Good! Info-dump is still hard to eat. What is your uploading schedule, if there is? I would love to hear from you!
Wow! I am hooked up! Good! ----------------------- Hey author, I came from Facebook group chat after reading about your review request. At first, I had no hope but this is some good cooking. And what is your upload schedule, if there is? Do you plan on continuing or just testing the ground? ---------------------------------------------------------------- Whatever, I hope your best!!
more chapters!!
Here I came! 123563+ki!!
Yeah Bro, It's been 5 year now. I had hoped that he had won :)
Here I am!! 124503+ kill
He heard some rustling sounds as he crossed the dark road, narrowing his eyes, he looked over and in that instant, his life flashed before his eyes as a massive truck sped towards him.
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
"Young man."
"Young man"
Dual Cultivation God Returns
Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion