Author here. I think I'll start posting chapters on Sundays instead of Saturdays as that will be easier to create chapters by then.
I definitely went too fast in the first several chapters, it slows down in the next long arc that will make up most of volume 1, I will also keep a slower pace throughout the rest of the story, I hope to eventually (a very long time from now) make a web comic version of this and the first moments of the story will be longer and at a slower pace in the web comic version. I hope that you will enjoy the remaining chapters I have posted thus far as well as the ones I will continue to post, I thank you for you're suggestions and critiques on my story. I hope my story can grow and become more popular. :)
A problem I quickly ran into during the early draft of my story was that Julius (I regret having not named him Adam), was that it was difficult for him to interact with other people as an atom so later on in the story Julius uses his body as an atom to avoid detection mostly and also if he needs to get somewhere quickly it is much more efficient to fly as an atom than to wak as a golem, I did make sure to say that he wouldn't transform into a human like form because I'm not really happy when isekai have a non human character be able to transform into humans, the rules of what he can and can't do are a little complicated even for me, the main point of him being a scientist is that he understands how the molecules work to help him with his magic. In the upcoming long arc the story slows down a bit.
Thank you for being my first comment :), I suppose the reason I write like that is that I haven't read many books but I have acted in a couple plays so that's just the type of writing that feels more natural to me, I'm sorry if this makes it harder for you to read.
Sorry this one was posted on Sunday instead of Saturday I had to make some edits before I could post it and I had plans on Saturday so I couldn't post it that day.
Sorry that I'm only posting one chapter today I have gotten more buisy so I will only be able to post one chapter a week
Sorry that this one was released a few hours later than usual I had a buisy day today
I hope you enjoyed the chapter :)
I started posting on Sunday's because it would be easier but I have seen that there was a large decline in views so I will try to post on saturdays
Reincarnated as the world's strongest atom
Fantasy · ZillaSaiyan1M