Moonflower414

Moonflower414

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A newbie. Contact me on discord. Id: Moonflower414 You can call me MingMing. ><🤍

2024-02-14 Joined Global
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Moonflower414
Moonflower414
2 days ago
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Review time! I have read until 185 chapters for now. It's a constant merry go round of misunderstanding. Though for a quick read, it's fun at first but as it goes on, it's a good book to fuel blood pressure to be honest. Translation Quality Pretty good. In a few chapters "he" is changed to "she" and names are occasionally written wrong. Story development Barely any development. The same misunderstanding is continuously made the big issue. Just to length the story line. The leads are stubborn and foolish. But at least the children are cute. Character Design .... Typical airhead FL. I do like her determination and the new approach where ML can't do everything and anything just for the plot. But she's just aggressively foolish. Instead of thinking calmly and acting like her age, it's just so so. The ML is god of arrogance and proudness. Such a prick. Instead of taking responsibility, just further continues the misunderstanding. He deserves to be hated by his children. Update Stability Good ig. World Background just so so. Although it has abit of a twist and characters have their fears and desires, it's just very.... Perhaps the first time i gave such a low ranking but well.

Moonflower414
Moonflower414
14 days ago
Posted

THE VERY FIRST BOOK THAT I HAVE GIVEN 5 STARS!!! Major spoilers here just, it's such a nicely written book. Chefs kiss! writing quality It's eloquent and simple at the same time. There are a few words which have hidden meanings but other than that, everything is understandable and no grammar mistakes. Story Development Bit on the slow paced. Lots of Mystery and the character development are carried out so. Every detail is given and i love that part!! Character Design 3D CHARACTERS!! ML has his flaws and isn't afraid to show it. FL is bold and quirky! She knows how to live life! I love their interactions cuz it's soo funny lol. But all in all, executed greatly. Updating Stability 2 chaps a day. No days missed, definitely a dedicated author. World Background one word: vast. THERE'S SOO MANY MYTHOLOGICAL ELEMENTS! Over all, it's a book worth the read. HIGHLY UNDERRATED and i wish for it to be popular! Romance is definitely a side thing but i like how it has all the elements incorporated such as mystery, romance, mythology. All the best author San. Highly recommend!

Moonflower414
Moonflower414
14 days ago
Commented

TRUE WORDS!!!

Xiaoling shrugged, "Life is long. Better live it lavishly!" 

Tale Of The Sorceress

Tale Of The Sorceress

Fantasy · Haru_Catty

Moonflower414
Moonflower414
14 days ago
Commented

Interesting, especially since he did murdered him. well not consciously but still. let's see what our sorceress do. moreover, how much is she paid? I'm curious about that, cuz that must be a hefty amount right?

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Moonflower414
Moonflower414
14 days ago
Commented

Theory time: I'm not good at mystery uncovering but, perhaps Xiaoling is the previous lover of Demon Lord for him, he left everything and created the curse. As of now, we are only touching the edges of the mystery so everything is under cover. Also, the demon lord saying that weishing isn't as innocent as he seems seems like a vital part.umm.... soo much to uncover!

Moonflower414
Moonflower414
23 days ago
Replied to aoi_hoshi_cath88

It's sad that she continuously gets these nightmares. But as we know, it takes a long time to heal the wounds from childhood.

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"Noo!! It hurts! Please don't!" She gasped for air. Her forehead was covered in sweat, and so were her palms. Her eyes shot open, and she saw the familiar ceiling. Her heart pounded intensely and filled the silence.

Secrets Of Loretto Legacy

Secrets Of Loretto Legacy

Fantasy · Moonflower414

Moonflower414
Moonflower414
23 days ago
Replied to aoi_hoshi_cath88

Ezel

The next day, I will personally test your abilities, and then we can coordinate the class further. Prepare your best for the academy." He was about to dismiss the class when Ezel, with his nasal voice, asked, "Sirr! What 'bout you're powers?" 

Secrets Of Loretto Legacy

Secrets Of Loretto Legacy

Fantasy · Moonflower414

Moonflower414
Moonflower414
24 days ago
Replied to aoi_hoshi_cath88

Yes indeed 🤍

Her lips slightly gaped, and her pupils widened. She was surprised, but it was a pleasant surprise. Nellie, although not a chatterbox, was good company and even offered to drop her off at her house. 

Secrets Of Loretto Legacy

Secrets Of Loretto Legacy

Fantasy · Moonflower414

Moonflower414
Moonflower414
24 days ago
Replied to aoi_hoshi_cath88

Not really. It was a mistake on my part.

Then I placed the bowl in the sink and left the house. 

Secrets Of Loretto Legacy

Secrets Of Loretto Legacy

Fantasy · Moonflower414

Moonflower414
Moonflower414
24 days ago
Replied to aoi_hoshi_cath88

I see.

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She reheated the porridge from the previous night and checked on Hael, who seemed better. She served the breakfast for herself and Hael. 

Secrets Of Loretto Legacy

Secrets Of Loretto Legacy

Fantasy · Moonflower414

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    Revenant: Poison Master's Journey in Spirit Realm

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE DARK SUPERPOWERS SURVIVAL TRAGEDY REVENGE NONHUMAN HISTORICAL MYTH

    There were six different realms apart from the human world. There was always far more than the eyes met and among those realms was the Kakurio, a realm of spirits where the yokai, Ayakashi, and ghosts coexisted.  Although this realm was connected to the human, no human had ever stepped into the land of Spirits.  Ito Asahi was the Heir to the Ito family. A renowned family of exorcists who were previously Onmyoji of the royal family back in the day. As the demons (Yokai) killed all his family members except for himself and his grandfather, they lived in a new place away from demons.  And yet, one cursed Monday, everything changed when Oni killed his grandfather. The Lust for revenge which had been held down now, arose like a volcano but how would he get to Kakurio… 

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  • The Billionaire Only Eats My Cooking original

    The Billionaire Only Eats My Cooking

    Fantasy SLICEOFLIFE CEO POSSESSIVE SWEETLOVE FIRSTLOVE CRUSH PREGNANCY GETTINGBACKTOGETHER BABY

    Soft FL and Shy ML ~ Updates: Everyday  ~ After finally getting her dream job of being a private chef, Chiasa hopes to work earnestly, only to realize that her unrequited love aka Yoshiro was her employer, and to add more salt to the injury, he had a fiancé as well. When Miyuki, his fiancé finds out about their childhood friendship, she takes no time to kick Chiasa out.  In such turmoil, she finds herself getting closer and closer to the closed-off Asahi Ito, who has supported her through her dark times.  Although she might be a villain in someone else's love story, that doesn't mean she shouldn't have a happy ending of her own, right? Dive into the cute, fluffy story of two shy individuals who enjoy food!  ~ Additional Tags: Tooth-rotting fluff, healing, bad boy good girl (spoilers), contemporary fantasy and Smut. 

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  • Secrets Of Loretto Legacy original

    Secrets Of Loretto Legacy

    Fantasy R18 MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG SURVIVAL POSSESSIVE ROYALFAMILY ABANDONED

    4.97 Completed

    In the imperial year 1820,  Luiza’s world collapsed when her mother left her on the night of her thirteenth birthday, never to be seen again. She was taken in by her biological father, a Duke. With no relatives or families, she now had to stay in the capital of Eunoia, where she was shunned from every piece of information.  For a few years, she lived the life of a quite noble.  However, an unexpected turn of events led her to a secret route, and she got her hands on a suspicious book that stated her mother had been murdered. Did she live in a world of lies? Was her mother truly lost, or had she been murdered? She started feeling skeptical of every event that had transpired in her life.  But could seventeen-year-old, timid Luiza truly uncover the truth behind her mother’s disappearance? Find out by reading Secrets of the Loretto Legacy!  ~ This story takes part in the WSA competition. There will be daily updates and each chapter will be 1k- 2k long. This book will not be discontinued, and I hope you all can support me! Thank you, Luwy (moonflower414)

    101 Chs 868 Collections