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This is litrally one of the best books i have read (i am on chapter 20) but i dont spend money so i am really dissapointed. Everything in this novel is really well made and it is really making me consider buying a subscribtion or something just to read this.

The writing quality is not that good, there is something missing, a quality which i can't really describe. (Im not a writer) Anyway if we forget some grammatical errors it isnt bad just... plain. The story is intresting and the world and setting is really intriguing, but the execution is bad, the setting is never really explained while this can be good, in this case it just make the reader confused. Things are repeated several times without giving any depht so it just feel like it is drawn out. The characters are kinda intresting but again the execution of them are unatural, feelings and emotions seems forced. Im not an expert but thisi is the impression i have gotten. My advice for the author is to have the story more concise and to explain more things, im not sure but i think you tried to have it explained through character interactions but if thats the case it wasnt really clear.