what is with everybody and their face loosing colour, and beside she is a dragon her face is silver white, there is no colour go loss on it.
Asimi's face immediately lost its color and her pupils dilated.
The Dragon of Dreams
Action · Commander_843
this also doesn't make sense too
"Adding another trip to the vault on the contract couldn't hurt. Most of the stuff in there is useless to us, and nothing in there is worth more than your life. He saved you twice now... Come on, I know he's a dragon, but he is also a kid.. your best friend's kid... Can you not try and use him without considering the risks he must take?"
The Dragon of Dreams
Action · Commander_843
this statement doesn't make sense at all.
"The public saw the fight in the plaza. If you don't put out a public statement saying you rewarded him, no one will want to serve you in the future."
The Dragon of Dreams
Action · Commander_843
Here are my thoughts on this scenario First of all hyenas do not feed on lion or it cubs, the only time something like this will happen is if there are no more prey which with your earlier description there is an ambulance of prey. Second, hyenas might not be intelligence but they are hunters, they are capable of ascertaining a situation and making a decision on the risk of a hunt which in this case with the adult not being far away is equivalent to suicide. They only hunt if they want to feed and a lion cub will not be able to satisfy there hunger at all. Third, almost all the characteristics and behaviours of the different animals you wrote about is wrong. I understand that this is a fantasy novel but if you are going to write based on lions, it environment and the animals it interact with you should do your research instead of writing based on two or three videos you watched on national geographic. Honestly I love the concept you are writing base on and can't wait to see you improve No shades 😎
PEAK !!! I REPEAT PEAK !!! This chapter was amazing thanks for the chapter
it doesn't make sense, why not just text her directly instead of sending him there
"Yeah, that's all you have to do. I've transferred her 150k credits that she'll pay you when you get there with her and deliver the message."
Intergalactic conquest with an AI
Sci-fi · Shazorwy
The novel was heavily inspired by ashes of the deep sea(also called deep sea ember on other reading platform) similar world world background with ashes of deep sea. A very lovely read 100% recommend
Yes !!!!!!! finally Thank you for the chapter
This novel has been very good so far, from character having dept to amazing world background and very good story development. The book has long suppress my expectations. A must read But for sometime now the author has not updated the novel and I am scared he has abandoned the novel. Please author don't give up on the novel, it hard to see quality novel like this on webnovel. At some point your novel was the only reason I opened this app
i don't think he should have the right to make such a huge desicion. since it is actually a public facilities that any pure-blooded dragon can use and not a private property
"In that case, I will let you settle here if you can, but there are some conditions." Seeing she understood, I continued. "First, the temple is off limits, and you must protect it once you have the means to do so. Second, if you ever get large enough to start collecting taxes, I want five percent of it. And lastly, I have the power to change anything I wish about the settlement, and you will all be killed if you run away. Do I make myself clear?"
The Dragon of Dreams
Action · Commander_843