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Hello, aspiring author here. Nice to meet you :) Please buy me a Ko-Fi : https://ko-fi.com/demonkingakuma
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I see... thank you for pointing that out because I didn’t see it that way when I first wrote it. For the most part, when I wrote his initial conversations and interactions with her, I wanted to show how my protagonist kept hesitating during the Orientation obstacle course. He kept bragging about how he would get through the trials in front of him but got halted and hesitated when he saw how ridiculous some of the trials were. So, she had to step in every time and "encourage" him, so to speak. But, either way, thanks for the feedback. I'll try to avoid that in my future writing.
I looked back at Victoria once more, but this time, my determined expression was back. "Yeah, Boss. I did say that. Thanks for reminding me." I thanked her while giving her the same thumbs up that I had given her just before. She stared at my determined expression for a moment, then broke into a giggle.
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