really do you really had to write about denail and waste half of the chapter
ch 22 Denial and Acceptance
Fantasy · Crypthh
you are rushing the plot too much, it's only been one or two days after his transmigration and he is getting bombarded with everything without any rest and what happened to lilliana while he was wasting time talking to system can't she see how abnormal the situation is when he just stands there talking to system and then faints suddenly.
ch 17 Chapter No.17 Chastity (1)
Fantasy · Suryaputra_Karna01
really it should be common sense to know what a gift pack means.
ch 12 Chapter No.12 First Mission
Fantasy · Suryaputra_Karna01
why don't you even describe how he goes to toilet to do his toilet work you're wasting our time by explaining his daily life like how many times he chews his food
ch 0 2 Chapter 2 Taking Kickbacks
Eastern · Sunk into the Pacific Ocean
then simply post all the contents you deem as one chapter and be done with it don't make readers just waste their coins and passes they have by dividing one chapter into small chapters and creating unnecessary drama.
ch 237 237:What Comes After Death?
Fantasy · Lonelythree
really forgot to lock the door,man it's messed up
ch 0 8 8. Lavish Meal
Fantasy · PeterPan
isn't he in too much of a hurry to get strong he is barely one month old baby. I think you r rushing the story can't you add a time skip of 6 years where everyone awakens.
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I want to know whether he will kill humans decisively or hesitate till he learns a lesson.
ch 203 The Escort Duty
Fantasy · Magecrafter
really he is a demon and hates demons it's understandable because he was a human before but he is not accepting the reality and still thinks it as a novel and without any strength he is thinking about useless future problems instead of increasing his strength.
ch 29 My Group
Fantasy · FriendlyFlame
he is writing about his reincarnation in a book, won't it be revealed if anyone read about it.
ch 0 2 Meaning of M
Fantasy · KLNovel
really is the no 01 hero a kid who plays with demon while fighting can't she finish it early and done with it.
ch 20 Unexpected Encounter (2)
The Transmigrated Author
Fantasy · zowji