Will try to post a new chapter this Monday. Thank you for reading my story.
Still waiting.
The phrase Kin na’tik. Means( I understand. )
Kin na'atik. Ezra said before leaving. The man was left speechless as he looked at Ezra's back, not understanding what the kid had just said. As Ezra left, he felt confused and a little worried as to why the top clans would be looking for someone with the same name as him. That's why he responded in the language he did. It was the language he would use with his mother or when he was scared or worried, or he just didn't want anyone to know what he was saying.
Endless Journey Through the Cosmos
Eastern · Feartreeko
Little mistake here I said body strengthening when it should have been body refining.
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Endless Journey Through the Cosmos
Eastern · Feartreeko
Hope you post more chapters soon.
Thank you so much for the good review.
Hope you enjoyed this chapter.
Thank you let me know if you have Any ideas on how I can improve.
Let me know if you have any questions so far.
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original Project Eclipse
**Note Important read the whole description. Humans first developed the ability to leave Earth’s atmosphere and explore space and time; governments around the world have been sending numerous people on missions to planets and galaxies in search of new resources. Everything was going smoothly until communication was suddenly lost from multiple spacecrafts, causing widespread panic among government officials. What could have caused the communication failure? Was it a technical issue, or was something or someone else responsible? Amid the chaos, a small group of government officials started a secret project using untested alien technology and other things brought back from other planets in order to create super soldiers that could venture into the unknown regions of space and time and deal with whatever was thrown at them. However, these officials were unaware of the problems that this project would ultimately bring. Eventually, the project would be known as “Project Failure” I'm posting this so people can see what i'm working on. **Important Please read** This is mostly a outline of my story. in other words it's my thoughts on how the story will go., but if you are to read my story. The story will make since from chapter to chapter for the most part. I am willing to take suggestions on how the story should go. Things that i got wrong and more. but for now enjoy my story Project Eclipse. Also this is not my picture if the original maker tells me to take it down i will.9 Chs 4 Collections
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Endless Journey Through the Cosmos
In a realm brimming with undiscovered secrets and rare bloodlines, Ezra is determined to overcome numerous challenges and adversaries. His quest is to uncover the truth about his own identity, understand his purpose in this world, and unravel the profound mysteries that are concealed within the endless night sky. (Notes) I am posting one new chapter every week! In story there will be certain parts where i will use words from a different language. I have some of the translation words in the Auxiliary while others will be in the comments of the chapter's. This is my first time writing a novel. I will do my best to improve my writing style and spelling. Thank you for reading my novel. If you have suggestions on what i can improve feel free to let me know in the comments6 Chs 24 Collections
Shameless author here giving himself a Five star rating. This is mostly an outline. But you will be able to understand what is going on from different chapters. I will take any advise, ideas and anything else. Hope you all enjoy the story.
Project Eclipse
Sci-fi · Feartreeko