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Tijani_lyrics
2 days ago
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you could try making the title something from the chapter. "chapter 206: wall of Tiberias [6]" could have been "Asher's arrival." but even with the title being repeated. it's all great. your story is good and the titles are simple. keep it.

Tijani_lyrics
Tijani_lyrics
1 years ago
Commented

author can you fix the gender reference. it's tiring to read I just keep skipping.

Tijani_lyrics
Tijani_lyrics
Tijani_lyrics
1 years ago
Commented

why did he still need to join the pavilion when he could acquire the skill books on the trading platform?!