Alright, gonna start reading again... I am missing out on way too much cause of ny damn heart issues TTI do hope you're doing well though man! Keep up the good work B)
I was supposed to read this way earlier but life had plans... I am tired once more but it did not stop me from reading this. Hella good chapter otherwise! With absolutely no problems. Though if I had to nitpick, it was the occassional moments where things felt repeated (not that they were repeated, just that it felt like it), which is sorta common for novels but sometimes it just slaps ya a lil. I also learned a new word today—ebb. Honestly broadening my vocabulary on this, great job man! I really need to catch up tho... especially since a new chapter is out.
Thank you! I'm glad ya think that way especially! I hope the upcoming chapters will continue to hit the expectations ya set B)
I genuinely cannot live down the fact I misplaced that period... I really need to sleep
You're welcome man. I am just happy I can. help, plus, seeing people is more than enough of a reward. I'll do what I can to help ya put further from here, amma actually now go hit the sack otherwise. Night
You're welcome bro! I am glad I could help B)) I will keep reading occasionally and give my thoughts and opinions on it, got your back on this
I am starting to think I genuinely cannot spell or create good sentences without proofreading TT
Honestly a goated book. Like dear god is it good. I may be hyping it up a lil too much but it does a great job pulling you into the story, and the writing really does wonders for it. Although a rather long book given the length of the chapters, it never really feels like its padding it out. Additionally, it honestly just exudes the story book vibe. A must read book if you like Tolkien's work (especially because its the author's inspiration!). Bro was cooking when theyvwrote this
I know this boutta be hella good. I am gonna read this tomorrow however, way longer than I expected... and cause its 12:27 AM right now. I am gonna have one godly sleep with the dreams amma havw from this, I can't stress just how good you did here!
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original Shining Abyss: Drowning My Depression In Another World
An almost 20 year old man answered the call of the void and meeting his end in his own hands. Upon his gruesome death, he realized he made a terrible mistake. Wracked with unimaginable amounts of regrets and trauma, from both his past and recent events, he is forced to self-reflect and introspect within a Abyss, where nothing but black darkness is all he can see. Faced with the reality that the afterlife might just be this Abyss where you float aimlessly, forced to reflect and regret for all eternity. But more hides within the darkness, as suddenly... the dark Abyss would suddenly start to shine. A bright white light shimmering across him as he is reincarnated. And vowing to never make that same mistake, he is determined to drown his depression and find happiness... all as something in the background lurks and grows. A great danger and mystery that he must soon uncover, as neither a powerful hero or a powerful fighter, or he will never see that happiness he seeks.12 Chs 11 Collections
Sure, I'll give it a look!
Shining Abyss: Drowning My Depression In Another World
Fantasy · Elusive_Toutawoo