I've read several of your works. I like them and enjoy reading them. I've never written a story, so I'm often unsure about giving a critique. In my opinion, most of what I've read in your work has two identifiable characteristics: a strength, the creation of epic moments with a strong emotional impact, and a weakness, the narrative pace, which sometimes makes it seem like the story is just an excuse for certain scenes.
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I've read several of your works. I like them and enjoy reading them. I've never written a story, so I'm often unsure about giving a critique. In my opinion, most of what I've read in your work has two identifiable characteristics: a strength, the creation of epic moments with a strong emotional impact, and a weakness, the narrative pace, which sometimes makes it seem like the story is just an excuse for certain scenes.
The Apostate in Grim Fantasy
Fantasy · Parcasious