It's a stab. But in her song, she's telling him to gently push the tip of the knife, slowly but surely. Feeling the pain and agony, both in mind and body. What she feels must also be felt by her twin brother.
"Seven, eight... push it for me."
The Suddenly Twins
Fantasy · QuinnKey
It's better if you don't remove an honest review. It will help you to improve. So here's my review: your quality writing improves. It's good that you use Grammarly or any related app to fix your grammar. And again, I couldn't properly review your novel; you need to upload more chapters for us to give a proper review, not bullshit reviews. And it will be much better if you update it daily.
currently at the hospital and reading this.. you demon 🤧🤧
So, they sat there on the floor together, holding on to each other and wept, each strong being showing their weakness in that moment. Needing each other presence to heal.
My Villainous Mother is the Feared Lord Fiancée.
History · VickyWinter
Read it plus listen to any horror songs. 😭😈
She then looks at him, and the boy looks back directly into her eyes. Yes, her beautiful eyes could stop anyone's heart from adoring her very existence. The girl's lips touch his cheek, and her tongue tastes his sweat and tears. The boy shivered; he couldn't understand what was happening, and he felt another hot steam coming through his pants. He uncontrollably peed again.
The Suddenly Twins
Fantasy · QuinnKey
yaaah.. this kind of concept bugs me for a while now 😅😅
But suddenly, while talking to his mom, a rift appeared on the left side, and this rift quickly ate his left eye vision. His eyes now saw two different locations at the same time. He got chilled sweat from his back and was afraid of what was happening.
The Suddenly Twins
Fantasy · QuinnKey
Honest review, first chapter will already tangle you by lady Lucinda to hit the next chapter. The interaction of mother and child (Theodore) was priceless, she'll do anything for his son and he'll do anything for his mother. I also like how the author imagine the dance party, it really caught me to seat in front and watch Lucinda and his dance partner together. (i thought at first they know each other 😅). Anyway the update stability is also perfect! World background can be created with story development so there's no problem with that. Aaaand that's it! I totally recommend this novel. Happy readers, happy author. 🥰🥰❤️
I'm sorry but I'll be honest. I couldn't rate this novel properly because first: it's only has a prologue chapter and this chapter was already written in your synopsis. Second, the lack of spacing thru your paragraphs, third: your updating stability. It's better to put a chapter every day or at least five chapters first, after that I'll give you a proper rating and review.
is this a prologue chapter?
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original Screw the Sage: Coffin
Since she arrived in town, a young girl with no given name has been working as a carrier for adventures. She risks her life every day to satisfy her ravenous stomach. But all changed when an elderly man approached and gave her a torn book. This book contains nonsensical words and symbols, and it tells the narrative of a mysterious guy wearing a bird mask, his child, and his own not-so-cheat system. ————— A thousand years ago, a Sage that shakes the whole world accepted a student. This student revolted against the gods, and the Sage suddenly vanished. Hundreds of years ago, the forgotten Sage reappear from the land and tried to live a very adventurous life. While traveling, he accidentally found a very special flower, and when this flower bloomed, a child was born, and he will take her as his daughter. The Sage began writing a personal journal while on his journey. This diary will become a forbidden and forgotten grimoire, and the whole world won't know its existence. Hundred years pass, and the grimoire will become just an ordinary, tattered book. The little girl who will own this book will essentially serve as the adventures' carrier. She will use this grimoire to travel across time and meet the forgotten Sage. She will learn the story and secret of the world, while her original timeline will meet a certain tragedy of apocalypse.5 Chs 1 Collections
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The Suddenly Twins
It all began with a lullaby. Jess Salgado opened his eyes and found himself in the middle of nowhere. A girl of unknown origin appeared in front of him, and she tried to allure him—he felt the sudden Cain Suddenly doesn't know what he was doing; he only followed her twin sister's lyrical voice—to stab that knife directly to her neck. Morana Suddenly assisted him but failed when Jess arrived at the scene. Confused, Morana lures him to be part of his twin brother personality, "first murderer" Suddenly. Jess will never be the same as he found out his ability to live in two distinct realities at the same time. While traveling and experiencing another reality, he searches for the secrets of the unknown world while doing the exact same thing in his original world.13 Chs 21 Collections
Wait, did I forgot to put a review here???? hahahahaha.. the story is really awesome and the character design are on point base on the story. Anyway keep up the good work! Happy readers, Happy Author!
ReWorld: The DwarfCat-earedElf
Fantasy · UelUel