DJMLucarionite

DJMLucarionite

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DJMLucarionite
DJMLucarionite
21 hours ago
Replied to killua32829

Well this part of the fic feels more condensed but it is mostly just this part. As for the pacing in the chapter itself. Well the battle didn't last that long so it was a fast paced action scene.

DJMLucarionite
DJMLucarionite
21 hours ago
Replied to killua32829

How so as I might be able to explain it.

DJMLucarionite
DJMLucarionite
23 hours ago
Replied to Karma356

It should be there now.

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DJMLucarionite
23 hours ago
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DJMLucarionite
23 hours ago
Replied to The_top_hat_slime

Yes as long as you eat it in the Training Chamber.

Not to be confused with a Hyperbolic Time Chamber. This Chamber has no time-altering effects but instead is an infinite Dimension that has customizable climates, gravity, and conditions. Can only be entered via the door. Any number of beings may enter at any time. Comes with an unlimited stock of food. Food can not leave the chamber. Cannot be destroyed. If damaged it will automatically repair itself after 24 hours. }

Begin Again In Marvel

Begin Again In Marvel

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DJMLucarionite
DJMLucarionite
23 hours ago
Replied to The_top_hat_slime

I will add it to the list.

DJMLucarionite
DJMLucarionite
1 days ago
Replied to Telarynn_Arwyn

Ri9 already has it from a previous Gacha Draw but Rio would at least see if any differences could be found.

The Trial is now over. Rio leaves with 253 Namekians, the Ginyu Force, and mastery of a crap ton of spells and techniques. Rio used the Two-Worlds Mandala as he wanted to see how it works and if it is as strong as it says. Also, it gave him some advantages. Rio now knows over 250 Spells. I decided to finally use Valkorion while still being insanely cautious about it. The next chapter will be the rewards. Until next time Ciao.

Begin Again In Marvel

Begin Again In Marvel

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DJMLucarionite
DJMLucarionite
1 days ago
Replied to The_top_hat_slime

Tri Sage Mode sounds great. The Tri Force will appear later.

DJMLucarionite
DJMLucarionite
2 days ago
Replied to Nick_Silver_6205

Not exactly but close enough.

Rio: "Okay that should do it for now. I should practice using the Force as it should be the most helpful on what seems to be a possibly normal Earth."

Begin Again In Marvel

Begin Again In Marvel

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DJMLucarionite
DJMLucarionite
2 days ago
Replied to Nick_Silver_6205

That is kind of the case for Rio.

So I was going to change the race from Alicorn since honestly, they are kind of too OP for this point in the story as you know being able to move a star is maybe a tad bit too much and most have no idea what an Alicorn is but I decided to rework the Alicorn to be less OP. I also remove force points as I think it doesn't really work. Stats and skills were slightly altered but not by much, basically I just reduced some buffs. I also added age to the status.

Begin Again In Marvel

Begin Again In Marvel

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    Begin Again In Marvel

    Movies REINCARNATION SYSTEM ANIME NONHUMAN LEVELUP VIDEOGAME MARVEL ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY RAREBLOODLINE POKEMON

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    Authors Preamble: This is my first novel so if you see anything wrong leave a comment so I can try to improve and/or fix it. My plans for updating this novel is hopefully everyday but I cannot guarantee that as I have a job and a life outside of this. I will try to have at least 1500-2000 words per chapter but I will focus on ending points so I don't just go on with a chapter for no reason. --------------------------------------------------------- This is a story about a Rio who dies when he wasn't supposed to. The gods decide to give him 2 choices, Rio chooses the second which come with 5 wishes. This sends him outside his home Omniverse into somewhere. First stop will be a sort of tutorial world and then main world which is the MCU with some differences. Rio will have the force, a modified gamer system, a riolu egg and DNA lock. I will not be writing any explicit scenes but they will be implied by fade to black when the time comes for such a situation. I have not decided on if it will be harem or not, most likely not unless readers really want it. Though there will likely be 2 females in the relationship at least but I don't really see that as a harem. If you have any suggestions leave a comment.

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