HiImHavi

I like how we actually get to see the characters (and not just the MC) grow stronger physically and mentally. I always wanted to see the characters of SAO properly adapt to the new world they were trapped in and not get a random time skip and all the sudden we’re on like the 47th floor and everyone’s gotten used to things. For me to enjoy a story to the fullest I have to actually like the characters. Being able to properly watch their progress can help me with that and we didn’t really get that in the anime (I haven’t read the LNs yet). This story however does the characters justice and gets me all giddy whenever character development happens. Now the only things I dont like when it comes to characters is a bit of the romance (hear me out). Its just my personal opinion so I wont let this drive the rating down but I personally think the romance is just a bit over the top, like my man gotta kiss the girl EVERY time he sees her and he addresses her as the nickname he has for her more than her actual name, but again this is a personal preference, it isnt the reason for no 5 stars. Only real reason is the updates, my only real qualm with this series. Its not that big of a deal. It is what it is. Thank you Author for creating this.

Almost perfect in my eyes. A pacing that suits my liking, not a complete typical scumbag of a villain he still has morals so you can still kinda sympathize with him, his betrayal I thought was well done, many unexpected things happen to the point I’m “Yo what thats crazy!” and find myself just shocked at what just happened. Now here’s what takes away the 5th star, the “romance” (if you can call it that) between MC and Tsunade. It is so unbelievably forced its not even funny, they’re an entire generation apart and on top of that they’re teacher and student, just kinda plain weird in my opinion. There were plenty of people the author could’ve chosen, but he just had to force him to be with Tsunade. Just have him born in the same generation as her if you want it to happen that badly, make it make sense not brute force it. Thats my only problem with this fanfic, as long as there isnt any scenes between MC and Tsunade, its great.

To be completely frank I am stunned at how good this fanfic is. At first I just wanted to find something Bleach related to read and I was met with this pleasant surprise. It’s such a breath of fresh air compared to all those transmigration fanfics where the MC automatically knows everything. While reading I even feared reaching the end of the current chapters available because after each chapter I just wanted to keep going. The way you placed Itachi into Soul Society and had him adapt to this new world and a good pace that wasn’t too fast or too slow (in my opinion) was just perfect. On top of that I love the way you perfectly expressed Itachi’s character to the point it actually feels like the Itachi I know with his philosophy and everything. Watching him begin to change his point of view and begin to be more trustful towards others after years of being alone and distrustful to the entire world just makes me want to see how far he will go in the future. I don’t exactly know what you’re doing with the trial for his Bankai but I have to say I am excited to see what happens next. Keep up the good work and thank you for blessing me with this creation🫡

I’ve read until Chapter 51 (max amount at this time) and I loved how almost everything was written. Grammar is perfect too. I’ve always wanted to see an MC utilize the Reanimation Jutsu like a necromancer (hasn’t happened yet but going by the flow I assume it’s going to happen). Though what ruins it is the fact that the MC had this weird fixation with making sure Orochimaru becomes a girl. Wtf?? Thats your teacher dawg. If this devolves into a Orochimaru x MC then I will drop it but I’m really hoping that doesnt happen this story has so much potential and could really be something great.