Tru, but by the end, she is dead, so she still fits the bill.
'Fucking hell... Why is there half-dead goddesses everywhere, next I will pickup Rukkhadevata in Sumeru and then when I hit Fontaine... There will be Egeria and Focalors! Reeee, whoever gave me this damned semblance was an asshole who didn't account for all the damned half-dead gods in this world!' I mentally screamed before groaning as I tried to sit up only for Shenhe to possesively to hold my head in her lap with her spear disappearing to use that hand to hold my chest down.
A Hunter In Teyvat
Anime & Comics · Azazyel
Tru
I took a deep breath as I felt Yae instantly grab my arm to prevent me from falling face-first into the shrine she said with some annoyance. "And here I planned on using this Civil War as a lesson to make Ei come out of her deep meditation... Well having Makoto return in some manner will be even better." Yae spoke more to herself as I blinked thinking I was going insane as Yae Miko's eyes glowed as she shed her disguise as a kitsune with all nine of her large pink tails forming from behind her to help carry my limp body.
A Hunter In Teyvat
Anime & Comics · Azazyel
I'm liking it a lot, haven't noticed any major errors or anything.
yea, I'm curious as to where this goes, please continue
A lot of the lore reads like it was written while on drugs, and I'm fairly certain a good amount of it was.
Speaking of race, what was with the deal with the sub-race section? Did that mean he had enough nordic blood running through him to reap some of the benefits? They were known for being resilient to the cold. That would've been useful on the mountain. And what were the chances that it meant he was Dragonborn?
Skyrim: A Reincarnator's Journey
Video Games · ISpyExp
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Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy
Anime & Comics · Life_sa_Beach_
love this so much, glad to read it again
As of Ch.20, I am very happy with this. This is the author taking a great premise from another work, but writing it their way, and thank God for that. I constantly come across fics with amazing premises, only to be let down by terrible writing, unlikeable MC, or some idiot locking the fic behind a patreon pay wall. I wish more writers would do what this author did, I can't wait for the story to progress further. I'll be watching for updates to this closely. Keep up the great work!
Don't let it worry you too much. I hate it when I come across an amazing premise that's ruined by bad writing/characters. I'm glad you made this premise your own, cause if this was a straight translations, I would have hated it by the way you describe it.
If you guys feel anything wrong please feel free to leave a review but don't leave a bad review stating things like, "Yeww it's a Harem" or stuff like that cuz there are tags for a reason, If you read a Harem novel with intention of single FL that's on you. All types of criticism are acceptable
Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy
Anime & Comics · Life_sa_Beach_
I think it was heavily implied before it was stated. Egerea was the mother/leader of Oceanids, and Focalors was a follower of her, so it would make sense if she was an Oceanid.
Furina was originally an Oceanid before being granted human form. As such, given the context behind the Lochknight title and who they were supposed to protect...
Genshin: The Serenity System
Video Games · Unusual_