another story that I abandon.... the Chinese always do the same thing, why can't they make the MC more normal? No, the mc always has to be a sick, depraved pervert who, the first thing he sees a "beautiful" woman, becomes an idiot... the story was a little interesting, but that detail ruined the entire experience of the story for me.
the tower has 200 years of history, but the mc is the only one who could do what he did.....doesn't it seem too convenient?.. it's very illogical, you already gave him an absurd ability, there is no need for the plot to be so absurd for the convenience of the mc, adding all that help the only thing you achieve is that the story is stupid and uninteresting
mmmmm Isn't it too easy?
I hope Dante dies and in an extremely brutal way
too many similar names, very confusing... I understand that they are the name of your language and for the writer they can be very different names, but for foreigners they are very similar and it is difficult to follow the story
Do you call abandonment nonsense? REALLY?
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Apocalypse Cheater
Action · ADboy245
What love if she abandoned him when he needed her most? And what if she came back repentant? as if they had raped her and cut off her arms, those are adult problems who can do something in defense of a baby, even a fly can kill it, so what forgiveness and repentance? .... for my taste it is not a good start and I see where the story can go
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Apocalypse Cheater
Action · ADboy245
not a good start, I mean it's Ntr and I dislike Ntr, besides being his mother and a mother who still loves her husband (her father), I dislike Ntr so this is not for me
well, second chapter and this story is already disgusting
The Lord of Void and Real
Eastern · Wang Yu