DaoistEzqtfq

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DaoistEzqtfq
1 months ago
Commented

maybe something like... "metal whip"? It could work so that the user is enveloped in a dim metal-like light that highly increases the defense and a little buff in the attack but with a decrease in the speed. That would be very useful in pokemons with high speed, since the decrease in that aspect wouldnt afect it that much but also increase its other stats

1- There should be an effect — both on the enemy and on the self.

Pokémon : An Unexpected Odyssey

Pokémon : An Unexpected Odyssey

Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet

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DaoistEzqtfq
1 months ago
Replied to castormed378

wait what

Flint sat there on the dusty road, the departing figure of the young trainer growing smaller in the distance. His body was slumped.

Pokémon : An Unexpected Odyssey

Pokémon : An Unexpected Odyssey

Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet

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DaoistEzqtfq
1 months ago
Commented

This si the Best chapter of they story at the moment. I rally liked seeing Austing using his strategies and calculations i'm battle. It reminded me of the old one. Keep up the amazing job!

Flint sat there on the dusty road, the departing figure of the young trainer growing smaller in the distance. His body was slumped.

Pokémon : An Unexpected Odyssey

Pokémon : An Unexpected Odyssey

Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet

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DaoistEzqtfq
2 months ago
Posted

The story is entertaining and the characters feel realistic while keeping their original personalities intact. In all honesty, there aren't many good undertale fanfics out there, so when i read this one for the first time i felt absolutely pleased with the outcome. This fanfic has absolutely everything an undertale fan can ask for, it has an original story, good characters, and doesn't have a harem or stupid bullshit like that. I recommend it conpletely.

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DaoistEzqtfq
3 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter! There go another 2 power stones.

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DaoistEzqtfq
3 months ago
Commented

there you go pal. I know that two power stones isn't much. But i hope it encourages you to continue with this amazing story.

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DaoistEzqtfq
4 months ago
Commented

This feels like a direct comment to me. I have spent dozens of power stones on this story. It reached a point were the count restarted by itself

Please stop spending your spirit stones on my fanfic! I'm not even updating it currently!! You people need to learn not to spend recklessly. Plus, it's a fanfic, aside from getting it up in the rankings, it doesn't do much of anything.

ATLA: An Impossible Task

ATLA: An Impossible Task

Anime & Comics · Turtle034

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DaoistEzqtfq
4 months ago
Commented

From now on, i'll just use all my power stones specifically on this story until it finishes. I've just used 8 of them

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DaoistEzqtfq
4 months ago
Commented

Love this story. Everything about it. If i am honest with you, i think this may be one if the best i read about ATLA. Please dont drop it.

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DaoistEzqtfq
5 months ago
Commented

Honestly i see it unnecesary. Cause at this point Austin must be almost champion level more or less and the orange islands and the orange league would be even easier. The only excuse i would find for it is to make Austin catch Lapras, but that's it

The masked man isn't an OC but an actual character from the Pokémon Adventures manga, though my version of the masked man is slightly different.

Pokémon : An Unexpected Odyssey

Pokémon : An Unexpected Odyssey

Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet