Liefy

Liefy

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2023-08-11 Joined Global
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Liefy
Liefy
5 months ago
Posted

the first chap wasnt bad, when is the next one coming [img=Your move]

Liefy
Liefy
6 months ago
Replied to Just_Lucid

hes a wise lil apple

If the two were not killed I could have been in danger. Mar Hast did nothing wrong.

The Holy Apple

The Holy Apple

Fantasy · Liefy

Liefy
Liefy
6 months ago
Replied to Just_Lucid

bro took talking to himself in another level

I remember, in most of the stories of old man, the King, or his son, who is called a prince, would often go out of their way to make their appearance in the scene rather dramatic and memorable. It makes their subject more inclined to love and obey their ruler.

The Holy Apple

The Holy Apple

Fantasy · Liefy

Liefy
Liefy
6 months ago
Replied to Just_Lucid

oh...

    When I first opened my eyes, there was only the corpse of my old man ahead of me.

The Holy Apple

The Holy Apple

Fantasy · Liefy

Liefy
Liefy
6 months ago
Replied to Just_Lucid

mar hast has been alive for a long time. bro probably knows how to differentiate between different types of powers

"Yes your Majesty. They are two humans of the assassin class. Hearing the rumour of your rebirth, they were sent to check your condition. I have killed them before they could do anything."

The Holy Apple

The Holy Apple

Fantasy · Liefy

Liefy
Liefy
6 months ago
Commented

good first chapter, but you should focus on grammer, there were no full stops or space in many places will be waiting for the next! :)

Liefy
Liefy
10 months ago
Commented

decent chapter

Liefy
Liefy
10 months ago
Commented

nah zain's literally me fr

Liefy
Liefy
10 months ago
Commented

....now the kid will never be "left alone" again!

At one point in time when he was younger, he fought a kid and "made him all right." You didn't read wrong– the kid lost his left hand in the fight and became all right.

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Note 0001

Fantasy · The_001_001

Liefy
Liefy
10 months ago
Commented

where is he saying this? why no description :(

"My dear subjects, please, I have one favor to ask of you.

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Note 0001

Fantasy · The_001_001

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  • The Holy Apple original

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