As the Author I must rate this 5 stars, because it is my work. so hello reader I hope you are enjoying the book if you have any questions please ask them I'm very open to answering questions,
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Not currently, but there will be later in the novel.
So the powers that they have slighty confuse me but maybe Im just dumb, but the pacing is a little fast and that makes some things possibly confusing so I would try to work on slowing the pacing quite a bit but decent chapter.
It is good that you can see some of the issues you have please try to fix the paceing issue since the character development can be showed in latter chapters
Im a little confused on some of the things you have but the concept seems to be kinda of solid so good job. ill keep reading it for a while if there in improvement so best of luck.
Loved the book so far, and as a fellow author I can just recommend to not listening to the hate but to also still listening since some people will give real advice
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Other than the issue with the text saying 5 out of 100 exp and then when the status screen says 5 out of 10 exp I would say that this book so far is pretty good for a start, I hope you continue to write and not quit like many authors
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Solid first chapter
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this book seems interesting
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After Riven Vales death due to an unfortunate accident but he was transported into his Favorite book series and was forced into the body of an unimportant character who had the bloodline of 3 major entities, each one of these entities hated each other so he must use all his ability seperarlty or else he risks his body imploding, all while he trys to not change mayjor events in the story. A/N I will upload when I have time but if the novel gains popularity I may upload more. so if you enjoy the novel support it11 Chs 7 Collections
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Author here, this book may be a year old at this point but I have big plans for it in the future, I will upload once a week on Friday at 9:30 exactly
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