Wasn’t so sure I the first few chapters, and some of the relationships from before the story left me wanting. But after a couple chapters it catches interest all the same.
I thought politically atleast these countries are more aligned with ww1, but if this is throwing me off, since Poland was a part of the old commonwealth which I think was eaten by Austria-Hungary. I guess this alt history has been a little mix of the ages.
Wang Zhong said, "Miss Heidewei, I truly understand your feelings. My homeland has also fallen and is currently being trampled by the Prussian jackboot. One day we will take back our lands. Melania will not perish."
Cannon Fire Arc
History · Count Constantine
I know this is a old comment but I think all of these are at a length where a 20% coup would make them 1 fp.
Nice idea, sad it’s probably dropped, passionate kiss was too quick but that’s minor
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I think there is a Chinese saying for an easy shoot but also a Buddhist saying very similar to the cave allegory, either works in a way.
"As for Kou Ruozhi and his men, they're like turtles in a jar. The real storm is about to come."
I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?
Eastern · Half a clear breeze
Transliterated
"The imperial court has ordered the arrest of the heretics of the Tianmu cult. Everyone must stay indoors! Anyone who ventures out will be presumed to be a traitor of the Tianmu cult and punished accordingly!"
I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?
Eastern · Half a clear breeze
Beginning has more hooks than I’d like, but writing was good and intriguing beginning.
Good start, the whole Mombie joke made me wonder about her mentality, but I guess that is something she is trying to address bout herself.
Cute, slightly sickly romance, the very first chapter she hadn’t warned ML a new skill, I’m wondering whether it really emphasizes there lack of communication, or just for a funny moment. I want to know more about the world and system, but overall looking good.
My dyslexia saw gang were as gang war when it just needed a space between the words
While I was moving towards the fourth floor, I heard the sounds of a flurry of activity as whom I assumed to be the thugs of this gangwere rushing to secure defensive positions to defend themselves against the raid.
What Do You Mean I'm The Captain Of A Yandere Mercenary Company?
Sci-fi · Draekai