Zerozackie - Profile

It's pretty bland at the beginning with a few info dumps and some grammatic errors but that's pretty much understandable.It starts to shine at the later part of the story, around here, you will notice on how much the author improved.Comparing the writing quality from CH1 to the later chapters is like comparing heaven an earth ( i'm not overestimating it! ). It's like every sentences are imbued with elegance, even the MC's inner monologue is not ignored.The pace of the story is just right, if -100 is slow and 100 is fast then it's around 0. Ren's backstory... i'm not gonna talk about it.The characters in the story are on my passing rate since i didn't found any problem with them, the same goes for the world background. I'm expecting the author to improve around this parts- no!, i'm confident that you will improve since there's still a lot of place unexplored in the story.