Not sure what this is doing in a romance novel contest, but i enjoyed it.
It is not my personal cup of tea, but it is at least well written.
Skip the first chapter. It is poorly written and almost turned me off from the book. The second chapter on make a lot more sense as a narrative.
I was surprised how much I enjoyed this book so far.
it is written well enough. just not my cup of tea
The grammar is good. However, there may be an issue with the translation as the central gimic of the story being a timeless archer referred to as they is easily mixed up with the villages they.
it's well written at a gramatical level at least. the story does have some characters not acting in a way human beings would.
this is a genuinely good story with art a cut above the AI generated crap that is on this site all too often.
I am not a fan of this one. I do not expect the protagonist to be perfect, but competence would be nice.
The Boss's Magical Secretary
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