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Okoski
Okoski
1 years ago
Replied to RubyRebels

Thanks for the comment, I'll do just that, but for the reason she is at magic school, read the auxiliary chapter, I edited it yesterday.

Okoski
Okoski
1 years ago
Commented

This chapter is really short

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Okoski
1 years ago
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Okoski
Okoski
1 years ago
Commented

little error

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1 years ago
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little error

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Okoski
Okoski
1 years ago
Commented

That's great. Why do you even care about him.

"Whatever, I don't care if he doesn't like the color of my hair. It's not like him liking my hair will do me any good"she thought as she walked downstairs though she still had a sad look.

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Okoski
Okoski
1 years ago
Commented

Is white not a color?

"How could I have thought someone could accept me and my colorless hair."Regina thought as Debbie helped her put on the wig. When she looked at herself in the mirror, she almost thought she had black hairs. Debbie's trick was so good, anyone who hadn't met her before would've believed she had black hair. She had to admit that she liked it.

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Okoski
Okoski
1 years ago
Replied to RubyRebels

Thanks for the comment, which you good luck with your book too. But if I may ask, how was your first chapter experience, was it only the writing that caught your attention? I'll love to know how readers interact with my book.

Okoski
Okoski
1 years ago
Replied to FANSS

Thanks for the correction 👍

Okoski
Okoski
1 years ago
Replied to FANSS

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_From this day! I will be called hero, majestic, almighty, just like Lord Iwatani in rising of the shield hero, I will be a merchant hero, and once I will have enough of money, I'll go back to my world._

The Enchanteds.
I'm the protector of the underworld!!
Eternity♪┌|∵|┘♪

The Enchanteds. I'm the protector of the underworld!! Eternity♪┌|∵|┘♪

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  • The Enchanteds.
I'm the protector of the underworld!!
Eternity♪┌|∵|┘♪ original

    The Enchanteds. I'm the protector of the underworld!! Eternity♪┌|∵|┘♪

    Horror ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM COMEDY MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS TRANSMIGRATION

    In the small village of Oregon, lived a young girl named Lily. With emerald-green eyes and black hair that cascaded down her shoulders, she possessed an ethereal beauty that captivated those around her. But there was something more to Lily than met the eye - a hidden power coursing through her veins that she was yet to discover. One fateful day, as Lily ventured into the forest, she stumbled upon a glimmering amulet half-buried in the moss-covered ground. The amulet, adorned with intricate symbols and glowing with a faint azure light, seemed to call out to her, as if it held a secret waiting to be unravelled. Curiosity overpowering caution, Lily reached out to touch the amulet. In that moment, a surge of energy coursed through her, causing her surroundings to blur and fade away. When her vision cleared, she found herself standing in a magical realm she could scarcely believe, the jean and black shirt she was putting on had turned into a thin green gown of unknown material. Before her lay a breathtaking landscape, with vibrant flowers in hues she had never seen before and trees that swayed with an enchanting melody. The air crackled with a palpable energy, and a sense of wonder filled Lily's heart. She had unwittingly stepped into another world, where everything could be possible. _Save him!_ _Listen to her!_ _Don't do this._ _Save him and 100 years will be deducted from your lifespan!_ It's a non demanding system, the system only gives quest for her to accomplish and in the world he transmigrated to, systems are known as enchanted. I promise you guys a nice read.

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