This chapter is really short
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Urban · FANSS
little error
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Urban · FANSS
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Urban · FANSS
That's great. Why do you even care about him.
"Whatever, I don't care if he doesn't like the color of my hair. It's not like him liking my hair will do me any good"she thought as she walked downstairs though she still had a sad look.
Urban · FANSS
Is white not a color?
"How could I have thought someone could accept me and my colorless hair."Regina thought as Debbie helped her put on the wig. When she looked at herself in the mirror, she almost thought she had black hairs. Debbie's trick was so good, anyone who hadn't met her before would've believed she had black hair. She had to admit that she liked it.
Urban · FANSS
Thanks for the comment, which you good luck with your book too. But if I may ask, how was your first chapter experience, was it only the writing that caught your attention? I'll love to know how readers interact with my book.
Thanks for the correction 👍
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Horror · Okoski
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_From this day! I will be called hero, majestic, almighty, just like Lord Iwatani in rising of the shield hero, I will be a merchant hero, and once I will have enough of money, I'll go back to my world._
Horror · Okoski
Thanks for the comment, I'll do just that, but for the reason she is at magic school, read the auxiliary chapter, I edited it yesterday.
The Enchanteds. I'm the protector of the underworld!! Eternity♪┌|∵|┘♪
Horror · Okoski