Your story is really captivating so far and I'm enjoying it. Just a suggestion: consider adding some spacing in chapter 4 to enhance readability. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to more.
Fantasy · Aenna
Your story is really captivating so far and I'm enjoying it. Just a suggestion: consider adding some spacing in chapter 4 to enhance readability. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to more.
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Fantasy · Aenna