Death_to_all_2816 - Profile

Good story you need to work on how do you call the main character you keep saying he then she

Good stories so far has a good premise would like to see more

What were you thinking about when writing this

Have high hopes for the story would love to see more of this story needs a better updating schedule

Good story so far needs to work on character point of view and explaining some things throughout the story

Great story premise would like to see more of this story. Hope it becomes a something great

Great premise for the story I love to see how it turns out don't drop

Like the story and the premise needs a better updating schedule needs to work on grammar

Good premise for this for a story would like to see more. I hope you don't drop any love interest or romance.

Sounds like a great premise was waiting for a story with Thomas Andrey to appear have high hopes for the story. Please don't drop.

I thought the premise was good until I read the tags why Yuri

Great story premise need some work on the updating schedule. Besides, that is good.