ManisGupta

Writing: Readable, enjoyable but nothing more. (3/5 ) Story Development: smut story nothing profound here. But antagonist could have been written better... A cold, cunning ruthless, master of demonic art is introduced but the next chapters his mother wants to sleep with Mc. Feels like failed comedy. Plus, everyone in sect is cuck-fetish who loves to see their wives with Mc. Character design: Chinese cultivation novel, big dual mountains, wide hip, long legs, jade skin free from all impurities, lotus feet, moon like eyebrows, ocean like eyes, cherry lips, and same. Update stability: 5/5 ( best ) World Background: 3/5 ( for a smut, this book has good world background that is comparable to highly great novels but has some issues because it's more Smut focused rather than world building. Overall: 3/5

Good read but not a great fan of Dark Fantasy that has child sacrifice. Writing Quality: Fairly readable. Story development: not to be judgemental but good development yet I am not the fan of such dark fantasy and cold, calculating Mc that doesn't even show his love to his women. Character design; Fairly good with lots of progression is side characters and heroines too which is very rare on villain novels. Later on the antagonists are real deal because multiple system and modern people. The battle of calculation is good but that's it's downside because it's slow pace. Update stability: 5/5... Best update stability🔥 World Background: 3/5... Not much known about world aside from necessary things, perhaps the world building will be starting soon, the novel is slow pace... Very slow pace. Overall: 3/5 This is a great potential story, with a reasonable and logical Mc which also becomes a down side for this novel. Slow Pace, Less action, less bed actions, more calculation, strong words are holding this boil down. If Mc showed more love to his women, more bed action and better world progression then you might have gotten more readers. The story is good for dark fantasy lover where Mc doesn't even hesitate to kill child then it's for you.

Good story! Gave exactly what it promised. [img=update]