The action should be understand like thisA ferocious strike is approaching me very fast, an attack directed to my head, or neck, tsk......i did not even give time to turn my head to look at the attacker Has that been little clearer?If not, i would like to see yours😊Note: i am practicing to wrote Descriptions for action scenes as short as possible for the readers to get completely hooked to the scene. While reading action scenes from books, explanation of actions is really breaking the fun, at least for me. I am a reader that is little by little becoming an author after all😅
As i am busy thinking while waiting for Sei's answer (the girl i am accompanied with by the way) a very fast approach is heading on my way, in my head or neck... Tsk... I draw out my sword very fast i dont even give time for my head to turn around and look at the attacker.
Unknown Phenomenon
Fantasy · Storie_muxica
I would like to know how you understand that😅The action really is strange and is a little hard to explain.If you can do a rewrite for that, i would like to give it a read.Well, if you understand the action being describe despite the weirdness of the description, i guess it's fine.I lack word materials after all
Whoah.. All i see is sei kicking the beast in front of me...as if the whole scene glitches and stop to that view then continues very fast!!
Unknown Phenomenon
Fantasy · Storie_muxica
Uhm, yeah, but walking is a process of moving from one place to another through raising up your legs or such.It's not like mastering the way you step your foot; to master climbing up walls, water, or air.Walking simply means walking.😑Thus, another mastery is born,The STEPPERS!!!😎But seriously where do you people get your gif's. 🐴🤔
A Mastery is made available to you if it is related to your class, like a swordsman will be able to get the 'Swordsmanship' mastery. A wanderer can get 'Walking'. A mage can get 'Mana-manipulation', as you can see, there are many masteries.
Talented necromancer
Fantasy · Mauritany_DL
I wonder what i could get mastering the walkerIs there still a wandering person at their town that hasn't mastered walking? 🤣🤣I wonder how a mastered walking looks like
A Mastery is made available to you if it is related to your class, like a swordsman will be able to get the 'Swordsmanship' mastery. A wanderer can get 'Walking'. A mage can get 'Mana-manipulation', as you can see, there are many masteries.
Talented necromancer
Fantasy · Mauritany_DL
Lab rat... Ugh... Well, it's already dead though
Beyern looked at the bag, and then slapped himself mentally. That's his first lab rat, he needed some practice to get it right in the future, and that corpse would be the sacrifice.
Talented necromancer
Fantasy · Mauritany_DL
Whoah, the story writing is kind of original, man... Hey author, are you a director or something? Haha the scenes are professionally done.The read is too smooth which is what i really like.To be honest chapter one is not that smooth, but, anywayEverything is good, too bad i am not into zombies😅I wonder what your fantasy genre novels will looks likeActually i want this 4 star because i hate zombiesBut i should not be bias here🤣🤣🤣
Tsk. Your only trying to get corpse for your necromancer 🙄
As i thought... She never comes here without invitation. She always invite me but i always turned her down. After all, what am i going to do inside the dungeon? Well, to help peoples like her is not so bad but i avoid seeing lonely place or depressing atmosphere which is rich in the dungeon. That place is a damned one! How is that even here on earth? A place where monsters infinitely respawn? Anyway i wont be going there.. Is what i want to say but..
Unknown Phenomenon
Fantasy · Storie_muxica
Flying can also be called running tho😅Every act to survive, may it be with vehicle, swimming, and etc.As far as i know, kt is running for lifeBut if this is pretty hard for the readers, the author will do changes💪
No way.. Can they even run from that person?
Unknown Phenomenon
Fantasy · Storie_muxica
No, at the next chapter, reader could understand that the MC still suffers the nightmare because when he woke up, he wipes out substances that is from his dried up tears😁I am trying to cover every plot hole you know🕳️🤣😎
I then give myself a free fall into bed and go to sleep excited for the next day that is coming to me with this unknown phenomenon. Magic that is...
Unknown Phenomenon
Fantasy · Storie_muxica
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original That day when the hero got defeated by the demon lord
A demon-filled world where the last hope which was the Hero got defeated. Currently hurried synopsis. Please be patient as the story proceeds. If possible, daily updates are to be expected. 3 to 4 chapters a week being the minimum. Add to library and share to keep the author lively.9 Chs 11 Collections
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Unknown Phenomenon
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In a peaceful kingdom, a guy named Azroths live lonely due to his parents death. After giving his all effort to avoid being overpowered by sadness through avoiding dungeons and keep conversing in town instead, a change occurs to him upon receiving invitation of an unknown visitor. Doubting the invitation knowing there are no possibilities he can get one, he read it uninterested. There he had learn something which is unknown! A word "magic! " what could it be? Well, It is not different from Azroths question. It gives him interest as it says magic can give extraordinary power to a person. But aside from it, he knows nothing! Only thing on his mind is... This one sure is an unknown phenomenon!!26 Chs 11 Collections
Why is it that if not vampires, always mortal against gods is what I am reading? Well, the story is good. It's fast-paced indeed. But smooth read and interesting. How would that boy win against the gods? He may be one of those failures too! I recommend this book. Looking forward to Lius meeting with his family
I Rival The Gods
Fantasy · Abdul_Maliki