Makkis_Literal

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I'm a horse, though not for sale. Nonetheless, how was your day. I'm sure you know how mine's is.

2023-06-04 Joined United States
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Makkis_Literal
Makkis_Literal
8 months ago
Posted

Now, I've just read the latest chapter of the book, and to what I would say out of everything I've seen, it's rather a ride. Now, the plot is rather unoriginal. What saves it, however, is the concept. The concept is rather odd but intriguing, and the action scenes and characters (in the later chapters) are very engaging. This is a fun book.

Makkis_Literal
Makkis_Literal
8 months ago
Posted

This book starts you off in the midst of chaos, which is one way to start off a book. The story then develops very nicely and balanced to which you have an easy time following.

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Makkis_Literal
9 months ago
Posted

I like the space background of it, giving such a nice setting that just builds the story and makes us immersed in the world of the entire story.

Makkis_Literal
Makkis_Literal
10 months ago
Posted

This plot just grabs you at the start, and you're not even prepared for it. You open the door and the next thing you know, you're trapped in the basement. But instead of being kidnapped, you're invited to a feast of a story.

Makkis_Literal
Makkis_Literal
10 months ago
Posted

The writing is really solid, and allows you to have a smooth reading journey, with a pretty interesting plot that keeps you occupied for a good amount of time.

Makkis_Literal
Makkis_Literal
11 months ago
Posted

The writing quality is very consistent and smooth, allowing you to fully read the story with enjoyment to the style and quality of writing approached here.

Makkis_Literal
Makkis_Literal
11 months ago
Posted

The writing structure is very odd, with an IMMENSE amount of space in between each paragraph which could be a bit disorienting at times. But if you were to ignore that, the story has a development that will peak your interest.

Makkis_Literal
Makkis_Literal
11 months ago
Replied to comic_nerds

I could see how you would think it would be tiring, but when I say trying, it's as if someone is trying you, like getting on your nerves.

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Makkis_Literal
Makkis_Literal
11 months ago
Posted

Woe is one that has to deal with a short amount of chapters, to wait for the story to fully develop. From how it starts, it assures you that you're in for a solid ride.

Makkis_Literal
Makkis_Literal
11 months ago
Posted

To start off, the book is quite engaging, with the first scene being quite the psyche-up. I would say, for advice, to immediately start with the sypnosis, rather than explaining sidenote information.

  • Perk Mage original

    Perk Mage

    Urban ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS ACADEMY URBAN RAREBLOODLINE

    Connor, a little lad living in his depressing reality, completely unaware of his surroundings... However... what lies ahead is a mystery to him... He is unaware that there exist secret organizations staffed by spies endowed with extraordinary abilities.... Unbeknownst to him, the MSTO is an alliance of espionage mage organizations that plans to impose its will on the world by causing widespread panic and terror  He doesn't know, that he possesses a Perk that does not depend on a wand or other external device, but rather is natural and passed down through a certain blood line. The opponents he will face are unknown to him... However, he will, in Perk Mage, soon. Also for the art for this cover came from this site: https://animanga.fandom.com/f/p/4400000000000004517/r/4400000000000037841 As well as this cover: https://wallpapers.com/wallpapers/gojo-sataru-k0ug6jgabsaxbcns.html

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  • NAh original

    NAh

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED SLICEOFLIFE

    Connor, a young boy in his disappointing world, oblivious to the things around him... But... he doesn't know the future that awaits him... He doesn't know that there are secret organizations filled with spies that hold powers of the supernatural.... He doesn't know that the MSTO, a party full of spy mage organizations, wants to inflict their power and strike fear into the world... He doesn't know that he has a Perk... that doesn't require a wand or another tool, but comes from inside... and through a specific bloodline. He doesn't know the enemies he'll meet... But he will soon, in Perk Mage. Also for the art for this cover came from this site: https://animanga.fandom.com/f/p/4400000000000004517/r/4400000000000037841 As well as this cover: https://wallpapers.com/wallpapers/gojo-sataru-k0ug6jgabsaxbcns.html

    22 Chs 18 Collections