character development. author has hinted that izumi will eventually grow out of her crush on itachi. she is a child. everyone has childhood crushes due to looks or other things. izumi will probably be the same. as for itachi, i agree. he is not a very good individual in canon, despite the justification for his actions. but his life in canon is not the same in this story. he has not carried out those terrible actions yet, so don't be too quick to judge him.
fight scenes and tense situations will come later the author mentioned he is building up the main characters early on before getting into the gritty actions.
his nickname is also green beast of konoha due to his wonderful jump suit
More than two years had passed since Kinjo arrived in this world, yet every day was eventful and unique. Today was no different, as his hunt for the Green Beast of Konoha continued. His hunt for a gunbai teacher was a failure, but he would not stop his search for Maito Gai,
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good catch, thanks
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this is what Gai sounded like in canon, but it does seem pretty funny but Gai nearly killed Madara in a one v one, so he's not wrong here.
"PERSEVERANCE!" Kinjo jumped when Gai shouted the word. "That is the key to success! You may think you are lacking because of that Uchiha youngster. But you are a genius as well, with your perseverance! You will beat your rival one day, and I will help you beat him!"
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not yet, the meeting is canon and happened before the coup was even planned. however, the symptoms are there and visible, which is why Kinjo is afraid.
"Ooh, you've also been going to those meetings, right? What do they talk about?" Izumi inquired.
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she's a lot more bubbly and less serious compared to most Uchiha.
"I am, Uchiha-sama," She stammered.
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i asked the author and he said that he didn't want to show every single training scene, so he won't go into lengthy scenes involving tree and water walking since they're well-known in the community. however, in this scene, kinjo was just testing if he could walk on water.
His eyes wandered to the pond, a shining oasis in the wasteland. He shook his head to ignore the traitorous thoughts in his head, yet they persisted. "No, I shouldn't try walking on water. It doesn't matter if I would look like Jesus; it's still a bad idea. I definitely have to master the Leaf Concentration Practice first."
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it's chapter 17 and the MC is 9, but author has mentioned he is doing more time skips and he'll probably be older fairly quickly. by chapter 50, he will probably be around sixteen, seventeen years old.
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There were worse ways to die... but his death was pretty stupid. Yet thrown into Konoha years before canon, he was given a chance - preventing the tragedies, even if it meant defying the natural laws of this world. Changing the fates of future terrorists and corpses? At least this time, his death would be memorable. A Male Self-Insert Fic with no system or bloodlines. Disclaimer: I am not the original author of this fic. All credits go to okmangeez on the FFN and Ao3 websites. I am just posting for him on Webnovel. What to expect from this fic: -A realistic and serious MC who seeks to grow his shinobi abilities. - Utilizing every possible way to grow stronger, despite his non-clan background. - An MC that is unafraid to make changes. As the author stated, 'prevent the tragedies while the heroes do their thing.' - Good character development with a healthy mix of canon and original characters. - Friendship, and possible romance in the future (?) - Great fight scenes. - A lot of world-building that is weaved into the story. - Slow at first, but builds up and goes beyond after establishing the main characters.14 Chs 409 Collections
i agree, and the author mentioned Kinjo will train Naruto a bit in the near future.
He wouldn't try to indoctrinate or train Naruto. No, Naruto needed to go about his own journey as his own person. What Kinjo could do was to be someone he could talk to, a person that could make his childhood just a bit easier. There was still time until canon, and he was going to ensure that Naruto enjoyed that time as a child, not as a shinobi.
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