eXtra99

i loved the story development so far and waiting for the world's reaction for her existence and also her's arrival of round table members ,i guess author should improve in pov perspective and 3rd person pov ,u kinda mixed it up ,also keep up the good work and plzzzz can u increase ur update time

I liked the character development but u kept the character interaction with other characters a lot less when there are so many famous characters in Naruto and also make him a some strong Ninjutsu which is his main weak point ,as a fan of Naruto ,i liked this type of fanfic ( can u help him develop Wood release of Hashirama senju since he is his descendant, imagine the wood release along with Susanao ,it will be like second coming of Madara Uchiha when he went for fourth shinobi war with five great nations,this is just my plea as a fan)