DaoistvE9zEr

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DaoistvE9zEr
DaoistvE9zEr
7 months ago
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Godfray? Is he nice like the one from seven spellblades?

An old woman wearing a dark blue robe and a pointy hat of the same color came forth and spoke to everyone present, "I am the Headmistress of the Clover Academy. You all may address me as Professor Godfrey."

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

DaoistvE9zEr
DaoistvE9zEr
7 months ago
Commented

OUR sword

Adam too felt the severity of the situation and unsheathed his steel sword that he had recently extorted out of one of the kids. His grip around the sword hilt tightened as he anxiously looked at the incoming wolf pack.

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

DaoistvE9zEr
DaoistvE9zEr
1 years ago
Replied to DaoistvE9zEr

Like, most people nowadays will not know if they are sexually compatible with each other until they try. There is problems of compatibility in sexual appetite, characteristics, etc between people. In the modern day you shouldn't feel bad neither think less of someone for trying to find someone emotionally and sexually compatible. This goes for both men and women. So, my point is that in novels it is not a problem to have flings, but I don't think most people really like harem. Because it is kind of demeaning for other characters and egocentric for the MC to not choose one person. People like to think that having more than one girlfriend would be nice, but imagine how hard is to show your vulnerable side to someone and multiply it by the amount of people in the relationship. I know I may be taking fiction too far, but I think that it molds behaviors and people and bad behaviors, can emotionally stunt people.

DaoistvE9zEr
DaoistvE9zEr
1 years ago
Replied to dylan_pyle

Don't have a problem with romance. But for the love of everything that is sacred please, I beg of you, no harem. There is enough harem. We don't need more harem. It is fine and even realistic for the MC to have flings, but you should do as Supreme Magus did and choose someone for the MC to stay permanently. Also, please, wait until they are at least physically 16 for adult stuff.

DaoistvE9zEr
DaoistvE9zEr
1 years ago
Replied to DARKFR0ZT_

I kind of rely on ads to read because I don't have money atm. Will check it out when I get the money. Unfortunately, I will only get my research scholarship next year probably...

DaoistvE9zEr
DaoistvE9zEr
1 years ago
Posted

Pretty nice. I would go a little easier in the flow of words. I can't pinpoint the exact problem. It kind of have a good, but synthetic feel to it.