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For me, I honestly think the term giggle is a bit off, everytime the author describes how the mc laughed because I tend to associate giggles with childishness. I mean there are many ways to express how the mc should laugh. There are also some things that is quite random, like there's no plan, and the author just added some random things to make it more interesting, but for me, it's getting boring, there's no spice added to the plot, don't get me wrong I love the storyline, just not how the author describes it when writing. Additionally, I don't get the sudden change of personality of the mc everytime the ml is around. I mean, I get it she wants the ml to feel he's special to her but the childishness, really...ugh, and also the mc tends to get stupid when the mc is involved. He should at least leave some of his brain open, u know