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This is fanfic, not meant to be any kind of big hit. I am in no need of any kind of promotion or help with my book. Please, no selling of any kind of services.

All is cleaned now, all the old material is taken out so it is good to read now.

volume one is just chapter 1-40 rest is old material that i am working on, i am removing it as I go along every volume is 40 chapters .

I am rewriting my book. one volume is 40 chapters, and there is old material left, I am working on it, removing the old material to be worked on. after chapter 40, go to volume 2 straight on.

Thank you so much for your review. I am rewriting this story from the start. The plot stays pretty much the same, but I am expanding, explaining, and adding stuff up, so I am taking all of this very carefully and trying to improve my story and get there some more depth and put those Damon´s in good use when I sometimes get there, but I am just starting my rewriting, and this will take time, but this was soo good to get real honest feedback. THANK YOU!!![img=recommend]

She is a woman, Mimi is a woman. Thank you for review.

there is because this is story about pack but that isn't main part of a story. there is all sorts of stuff in my story so every warning will apply. This is for adults and for strong ones because polygamy isn't the roughest theme in my story. Krista. the author :)

A nice story. Very believable characters and I look forward to the new songs. Smooth good rhythm in storytelling and believable dialogue.Excellent world building and character development.- The story has a lot of potential. Will definitely be in my library and I enjoyed this story very much.