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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
I think that the story development is very good, and also, the character design, keep up the good work
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The storyline and development are good and the world background too is good and I think this story is going to turn out to be great but the major problem is the update rate
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The storyline is interesting but your writing skill still needs a lot of work.
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I'm impressed the number of mistakes have reduced but I still found one or two that were wrong.
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5he story line is good but I'm starting to notice more spelling errors.
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why did claven call him Jack while his name is Jake?
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based on what I've read this novel is going to turn out great.
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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Fantasy · The_Broken_Author