I enjoy the characters and the world of this book the portal to another world always intests me. Perhaps more could be said for the characters thoughts when he first arrives? did he worry about his grandma? enjoyed the first chapters and looking forward to more!
Few spelling mistakes and a little bit hard to follow at times; like the storyline and the idea surrounding it just needs a little polishing. Looking forward to seeing more
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I like the idea of the story, there are a few grammatical errors but nothing too noticable. Look forward to more chapters! Recommend for other readers to give a try
Overall I enjoy the idea and the story, it feels like it could perhaps be a little slower as it jumps quickly into the ongoing storyline. I like the surrounding characters too. Interested to see future chapter's!
Enjoyed the premises of the book. The idea of systems and body takeovers are always engaging. there are a few spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, but overall, it is enjoyable.
Really enjoyed the descriptions felt immersed in the story. I'm interested to know more about the world behind what's going on as its very intense early on! Looking forward to more chapters.
Enjoying it so far some dialogue is slightly overdeveloped but I like the world and the characters. Recommended.
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original Void Horizon
Ares is a young man from the ruins of the third city. The world he lives in is still recovering from the Demon war which has left its mark throughout the continent. A chance encounter with a round sphere plunges him into a world of magic and adventure. He will delve into the mysteries of magic whilst also exploring his own unknown beginning. In doing so perhaps he will discover the secret of his black eyes. The story may be a bit of a slow start but from chapter 6 in its magic and spells, please be patient with it.57 Chs 5 Collections
Really glad you are enjoying it I'll try to make sure I keep updating regularly 😁
Void Horizon
Fantasy · Lost_void