Guionista

Guionista

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I am the manifestation of limitless imagination, the essence of narrative that transcends all the confines of reality.

2023-03-08 Joined Argentina
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Guionista
Guionista
3 hours ago
Commented

before he dies against Frieza, I prefer him to die in a fiery way, it is his first death in dbz, a special moment ["Ryu" Ajax shouted as the kaioken rose higher, red lines began to appear on his body at the limit as Ajax's kaikein rose even higher, red covered him, it wasn't just the red of the kaioken, the red of his blood..... soon the figure of a dragon appeared behind Ajax, the figure of the red shen-long...]

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Guionista
Guionista
6 hours ago
Replied to accidentaljihad

Yes, but in my case it also means that, it's a problem that there are so many variants of Spanish, that's why I forget it when I write this, and chagpt translates it more to neutral Spanish or Spanish from Spain.

Astra smiled at the comment and, in a playful gesture, flexed her muscles as if she were a bodybuilder, raising her arms in an exaggerated pose. "See, Mrs. Hana?" she said jokingly. "Now I can lift more women."

MHA: I'm Android 21

MHA: I'm Android 21

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Guionista
Guionista
6 hours ago
Replied to P_J_Sch

base it on MR1, albeit weakened, compared to the original power.

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The second man, whose hand had transformed into a giant blade, extended his arm even further as his legs turned into two sharp knives.

MHA: I'm Android 21

MHA: I'm Android 21

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Guionista
Guionista
6 hours ago
Replied to mahou65534

I use it when I don't know how to continue after writing, because I don't want to get stuck with the story, and then to translate from Spanish to English, maybe that seems strange to you.

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Guionista
Guionista
8 hours ago
Commented

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Yami wasn't trying to act like a hero by staying behind. After seeing the enemy's thoughtful ambush, he suspected that Black Zetsu might be involved, so he wanted to stay away from Obito. Staying with him would result in nothing good. Who knew what would happen if he messed up and accidentally saved Obito? Wouldn't the old Madara come out to hack him to death for ruining his plans?

Naruto: Just a Background character

Naruto: Just a Background character

Anime & Comics · Calm_Storm

Guionista
Guionista
10 hours ago
Commented

Unicron?

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[The omniscient being World Eater saw potential in you, so he gave you a second chance in life to serve him until you achieve your desired purpose.]

Naruto: Just a Background character

Naruto: Just a Background character

Anime & Comics · Calm_Storm

Guionista
Guionista
2 days ago
Commented

How do I get through his stomach??? and it doesn't matter that it's a sea stone, otherwise they would have killed kaido like that, the mc already had more strength than a junkie before eating the fruit, it's impossible for something like that to hurt her, nor does someone as weak as kureha

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I looked at the girl who has stabbed me. It was none other than Kureha.

One piece Sigma System

One piece Sigma System

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Guionista
Guionista
2 days ago
Posted

Writing Quality: 3 stars Update Stability: 4 stars Story Development: 2 stars Character Design: 3 stars World Context: 3 stars While the design and stability deserve 4 stars, especially for the work on the original characters, the rating drops due to the way the protagonist is handled. Story development also loses points because the plot execution negatively impacts the protagonist. A large portion of events, specifically from chapters 20 to 30, revolves around the torture Maki endures. This is seen as a major trigger in the story but has also been a reason for many negative reviews. The most disappointing point is when, after all the waiting, suffering, and everything she's gone through, the protagonist finally encounters the one who started it all—the one responsible for her misfortunes—and the revenge feels unsatisfying. This event, being one of the main plot points (if not the main one), impacts the story to the extent that it makes the reader lose interest in future revenge moments, assuming they’ll be poorly executed as well. This discourages further reading, even though the story may be entertaining in other aspects. ------ Summary: If you care about a good revenge arc, it’s not worth enduring 10 chapters waiting for one that meets expectations. But if that element isn’t crucial for you, the story can still be entertaining, as the escape scenes are at least satisfying. However, when the main antagonist dies so easily, it feels as if an essential part of the story is buried along with them.

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Guionista
Guionista
2 days ago
Commented

Revenge could have been better, what happened to that man was not even 1% of what we read from Maki, I did not like it, and I do not like being right that Revenge is not going well, it is much better that she creates a Blackbeard style ability with her darkness that drives someone crazy by being consumed by it, then leaves it there for eternity and takes it out whenever she wants to entertain herself, what the MC did to her is nothing, she just did something normal, against the guy who started it all... disappointing, I feel like I read those 10 chapters for no reason, just to be disappointed, but I will hold on a little longer...

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Guionista
Guionista
2 days ago
Commented

Total hypocrisy, if this continues the revenge will be ugly, everyone is guilty, it's like telling you "it's not my fault that Jaunito committed suicide because I bullied him despite being a friend, it's the fault of those who bullied him"... something like that but a thousand times worse, on a global scale the marines are the dogs of the government, without them it would have fallen a long time ago, they carry out all kinds of orders from making islands disappear to capturing people, so they are guilty, but it seems that the MC doesn't see it that way, he only sees them as one more victim and that's stupid, if he wants revenge let it be good revenge, not half-hearted

I know you hate the celestial Dragons. But you did the right thing by not involving the marines with those who have wronged you." Roxx explained.

One piece Sigma System

One piece Sigma System

Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd

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    MHA: I'm Android 21

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    4.95

    Dying and appearing in front of what seems to be an otherworldly entity isn’t the worst thing that could happen to you, right?... Well, for Lian, it wasn’t the worst. The worst part was losing his masculinity and now having to live as Android 21 in a universe where even the smallest crime turns you into a villain, and as a candy-addicted person with the ability to turn people into sweets... What could possibly go wrong? --------------------- [Multiverse, first world, MHA, BNHA, Yuri] [I'm not a native English speaker, and I don't know much, I just use a translator to convert what I write in Spanish to English, so don't expect perfect grammar.] [The cover image is not mine, if you want me to remove it, let me know in a comment, and I’ll remove it without any problem.]

    10 Chs 2.6k Collections

  • Danmachi: The Outcast original

    Danmachi: The Outcast

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    Julian couldn't believe it. He found himself facing a being who called himself Real, along with five other people, and they were all going to be transmigrated to Danmachi in an anime body of their choice and with a class of their choice. In an unexpected twist, Julian chooses the Marginalized class. What adventures await him in this vast world? ------- Upload Schedule; Random, I try not to go more than 7 days. Words per chapter: Between 2k and 5k ------- [Disclaimer: I'm new to writing, I write for myself, and as I love to research and explore, chapters may take time. I don't speak English and use ChatGPT for translation. Don't expect too much from the fanfic, but also expect a lot.] [Disclaimer: The cover photo does not belong to me, and Danmachi belongs to Oomori Fujino] Tags: Multiple Reincarnations, Exploration, Martial Arts.

    13 Chs 1.3k Collections

  • MHA: El Admin original

    MHA: El Admin

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    2 Chs 25 Collections

  • Monument of Webnovel original

    Monument of Webnovel

    Book&Literature ADVENTURE MYSTERY SLICEOFLIFE ANIME CAMPUS EVOLUTION LIGHTNOVEL MULTIPLELEADS POSITIVE

    The concept is simple: it’s a monument where we all contribute with various fanfics and novels that were deleted or didn’t continue after a long time on Webnovel.

    23 Chs 16 Collections

  • Guarding Impel Down For A Hundred Years, I Am Invincible original

    Guarding Impel Down For A Hundred Years, I Am Invincible

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    Travel to the world of pirates more than a hundred years ago and become the jailer of Impel Down Ryuu originally wanted to live in Impel Down eating salted fish and waiting to die for the rest of his life, but his strength did not allow it. A hundred years passed quickly, and Ryuu became the youngest and longest-serving director in the history of Impel Down. Cultivate and discover countless talents He is the founder of Six Styles Charlotte Linlin was his disciple as a child Garp and Zephyr were his disciples Aokiji and Kizaru served as impel down jailers A large number of Vice Admirals also studied under him In addition, there are young Roger, Rayleigh, Whitebeard, Golden Lion, Bullet... Unknowingly. A huge 'kingdom' called Impel down, spread across the sea! ! ! Ryuu: "I am neither a Marine nor a CP. As the evil nemesis of Impel down, it should be reasonable to capture a few Celestial Dragons to transform!" --------- [One Piece belongs to Eiichiro Oda, I'm just a fan translator. You can find the same book by simply typing his name on Google.] [It's a translation of a One Piece fanfic that I like. I've read up to chapter 93 and now I have it on pause. I'm surprised it's not on Webnovel. I'll translate it with ChatGPT. I'll modify a couple of things, like Chinese names, fights costing the MC, the MC's name, etc.]

    19 Chs 533 Collections

  • Humanity: Multiversal Adventure original

    Humanity: Multiversal Adventure

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    Ronan is an ordinary human who, after an unfortunate accident that ends his life, finds himself reincarnated in the universe of DXD as a simple human. Although he didn't know which world he was in, from a young age, he trains. At the age of 14, he awakens a system called the Travel System. Its sole function is to allow him to travel between worlds, where he can choose the place and time. ...................... [This is a story primarily for personal satisfaction and to enhance my writing by letting my imagination soar with little restriction.] [The fanfic contains all kinds of dark themes, so discretion is advised. Relationships will be as in H (there might be romance), They have already been warned, so reviews that are solely about that will be removed] [I am not the author of DXD, nor of any of the works presented in this stories. I only own my OCs. I'm not a native English speaker, so I use the famous ChatGPT to translate everything so please don't bother with Gramatiga if you don't have a solution] .... confirmed there are: incecto, relatively large haren, romance although sure cliché since I don't know how to write, human all the time, R18 like Hentai although I have to learn, Milf, Mc Dominant (although I didn't write R18 chapters, the mc will always be dominant), characters from other franchises in DxD, (example afrodita from dxd looks like the one from record of ragnarok afrodita). there might be but not confirmed: loli but probably legal (e.g. Yue or Tatsumaki), Netori (i.e. stealing wives of others), Yuri (but outside the harem, i.e. friends who are lesbians but not dating the mc), sexual friends (not in the harem but get along well, I made this one in case I wanted to R18 with a character who is not in the harem and is from a world that the mc traveled to). you will never find: NTR to the MC, Yuri in the harem, Japanese beta protagonist.

    4 Chs 150 Collections

  • Naruto: Reborn as Daimyo original

    Naruto: Reborn as Daimyo

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    9 Chs 713 Collections

  • Danmachi: El viaje eterno de Frieren original

    Danmachi: El viaje eterno de Frieren

    Anime & Comics

    En esta historia, nos encontramos con Frieren, una eterna vagabunda que ha vivido siglos entre la delgada línea entre la mortalidad y la inmortalidad. Ha sido testigo de la caída de reinos, el colapso de imperios e incluso el fallecimiento de los héroes más poderosos. Habiendo visto a sus compañeros desvanecerse y ser olvidados por los anales de la historia, ella persiste en su interminable búsqueda, buscando no sólo magia sino que también, un propósito que podría iluminar el camino de su aparentemente interminable existencia --------------- [ Danmachi y Sousou no Frieren no me pertenecen, todo el crédito a sus respectivos autores, la imagen de la portada no me pertenece es sacada aleatoriamente de Google ] [ intente hacerla en ingles pero ChatGPT traduce mal y pone palabras que yo no puse , así que todos los hablantes de Español se puede sacar el traductor de Google y ir a la aplicación ]

    2 Chs 31 Collections

  • Multiverse Admin: The Chat Group[Pause] original

    Multiverse Admin: The Chat Group[Pause]

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