Not bad, but there are a few issues. 1) MC doesn’t integrate powers from worlds he travels to. He is just a system puppet. There’s literally nothing going on except what the system organises for him. Like he wasted 11 years in JJK? Could have learned Black Flash and some other good stuff. 2) The system is omnipotent. It’s an AI entity that can alter reality and do whatever. It should just be a template provider. That’s it.
Ayo, too much Xianxia vibes
Idiotic. That was literally the only thing you needed to guard against. Drop
Bruh, such a cheap move to keep Frieza alive. It would be much better to just resurrect him
I’m dropping this bs. MC has Sharingan but it’s a useless one that can’t learn anything? There is not a single untalented Sharingan user because Sharingan contributes to ninjutsu talent. There are only 2 crucial events since the start of the book: Shisui’s suicide and Uchiha Massacre. Just 2. Not 3 or 4. MC just needed to keep these 2 in mind. MC basically can reliably predict future and has meta knowledge, yet nothing changed. Idiotic.
Was there absolutely no way to ask for a loan of a few million Ryo from his grandfather or Fugaku? Just say you wanna squander them and will not forget the favor.
The author added too many elements, mixing in Marvel, DC, JoJo, Bleach. The plot is super messy, not to talk about cosmology. MC’s personality is blank. Simple grind and nothing else
Well, you made the work much less interesting by not allowing bad guys to participate. Plus, you allowed Narcissa to participate but not Snape? Crazy
Author should have spawned MC after Aizen defected. Otherwise, him letting Hogyoku go is just silly
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original American comics: Superman? I'm Homelander!
Jeno travels back to the early days of World War II, obtains the Homelander panel, and conquers countless worlds. [Inject Super Soldier Serum to obtain Homelander template reward!] Create a Black Ops team and be rewarded with super durability! Kill the Red Skull to obtain Compound V. [Teach Superman to gain a bioelectric field!] Iron Man: My Anti-Homelander armor is useless against him. Thanos: I have never seen a superhero who is more villainous than me. Spider-Woman: He told me that with greater power comes more choices? Superman: He taught me how to be a superhero. Batman: Establishing the Anti-Homelander project.2 Chs 10 Collections
It was not a bad start but I dropped after he attacked Konoha, further damaging its vitality. Kinda no insight into his character and what his views are. MC just does shit. No reasoning
Naruto: From Konoha to One Piece (and Beyond)
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