I see some people in the comment being like, "As far as there was a good reason for her to break up with him, then, that's okay". Reading this paragraph, I rushed to go and skim through later chapters, and yeah, I believe they got back together. A relationship that was built through the targeted and imposed influence of the female's parents, even if she later came to truly love him, can't be that strong. I think it was revealed in a certain chapter later that the parents threatened her to break up the relationship, and only after Allen saved her from a serious accident and danger, revealing his strength, did the parents and the girl agree to reunite the relationship. In my opinion, regardless of how she was threatened, can't she find a way to convey the message across to Allen, stating the reason for such event to take place; and that is if she truly loves him, cos if it was in real life, I would like to believe that that Emma girl is vicious and cunning. She purposely didn't want to convey a good reason for the unofficial breakup, allowing the Allen guy to wallow in sorrow. I believe that this is a slip up in author's skill, writing from the author's perspective and not from the character's POV. Because, if she truly loves him, she could request for a final moment with him from her parents, regardless of the threat, after all they can't kill their own daughter or take too extreme actions like killing Allen, which could probably affect their daughter's mental health, and end things on an official note. But no, she didn't, probably to leave a loophole to reenter the relationship in the future, if needed. Unless the MC is a simp, then no reason can justify her actions. I just wanted to rant about this, cos I feel that this book has been a good one so far, greatly disappoints me with this plot mistake .
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Fantasy · Angeldrex
Because of a certain bug in the app, I can't type comments through the normal method, so I had to type it here; after all I couldn't bear to follow the solution suggested by a certain worker at the customer service — Clearing my cache, with a possibility of my downloaded stories and saved novels being cleared - I hope someone gives me a better solution. As for my comment... In a certain paragraph it was said that live streaming was better than recorded video. In my opinion, such method isn't 100% user friendly. Lets forget about the MC who has his identity hidden; imagine an ordinary awakener, by a struck of luck, encounters a big secret or opportunity, or an incredibly valuable loot dropped by a monster; like a Mythical kind of weapon. In such situation won't his sudden wealth be exposed and might even attract unnecessary troubles like assassinations and oppression from the government. If it was an opportunity that might increase his strength, or serve as a hidden card, won't it loose its value as a secret or hidden card. Just saying my thoughts 🤷... A nice and interesting book so far
ch 36 The Missing Trio
Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs
Too low for that level of risks 🤔
Andre nodded, "Haha, you could say that. Even the lowest-rated C-class awakeners get a subsidy of five thousand yuan a month."
Fantasy · Doubleyolkeggs
If Usain Bolt was said to be the fastest , then Flash was said to be the fastest.🤔
If the Nan Shen Weapon was said to be invincible, then the Imperial Divine Weapon was said to be invincible.
Anime & Comics · smart999time
I haven't even gone that far into the book but I've encountered not less than five cliche scenes/plots. Now, here we are, stumbling into the 'Old Martial Master' /' Hidden Old Master' cliche plot.😮💨 I think it's time to exempt my brain cells from exerting work while reading this book.
A middle-aged man with oil-slicked hair and graying strands was powerfully practicing boxing.
Urban · Orange Fried Spicy Strips
Just from the first chapter, I was able to guess that this book might just be completely filled with countless unnecessary cliche and cringey plots, face-slapping and useless Chinese novel plots and actions. After the second chapter, this speculation of mine was confirmed. I feel like I slipped up, placing high expectations on this book after seeing the cover and a certain review🤦♂️😮💨. Anyway, let's just keep going🤷
ch 0 2 Chapter 2 I'm Here to Break Off the Engagement!_1
Urban · Orange Fried Spicy Strips
Hahaha 🤣🤣🤣... This's so funny. With the quality and technological level of phones back in 2002, there's no way they can piece up an iPhone or Samsung Galaxy, not to mention the camera effect, technology, efficiency and accuracy. The courage and shamelessness of this guy to stand on that stage, before the world, and boldly spout BS. Imagine if such occurrence were to happen in our world, where an unknown company launches advanced clothes that could protect a person from the partial impact of an atomic/nuclear bomb, provide one with 12hour endless energy and various others, then, Gucci, Versace, Balenciaga and other top clothes and luxury companies come up with such a ridiculous excuse like this... Well, it just depends on who's gonna buy such excuse. I don't know why, but I really find this paragraph funny 🤣😂🤣
"Anyway after we put all of our most advanced tech pieces and knowledge together, oddly we saw the phones we could produce were almost the same as the phones of that company!"
Sci-fi · MadReader
I don't know why everyone one ranting about minor mistakes like this. The novel's setting and introduction, so far, has been a good one. If the author says that no one was able to detect the change in gravity and magnetic field in three seconds, then there must have been a reason. Even if people were to notice that such changes happened under three seconds, they probably wouldn't be able to find the cause. Just imagine feeling a slight tremor under your feet, after a certain time has passed, you tend to ignore such occurrence without knowing that an earthquake happened within those three seconds. Or imagine the sun going out for three seconds, even if the scientist were to investigate, they probably won't find an answer, or create false theories like; the sun's dying or reaching the end of its lifespan. Besides, this 's the author's story; if he says that one needs hundred galaxies of energy to time travel, then, don't try to bring your own theory into the chapter's comment, cos that's how the author wants his story settings to be. Anyway, you guys can keep ranting in the comments, I love seeing BS theories and stuffs like this. I prefer ranting when it involves cringey and cliche stuff
Currently, both the magnetic field and the gravity of the whole universe which kept the galaxies and planets in certain distances from each other was changing places to the exact opposite direction. Negative was changing into positive while the positive became negative. The whole process took about three seconds so no one sensed anything amiss or different at all.
Sci-fi · MadReader
With my personality, I feel like this MC needs a whooping. This discussion couldn't have gone to such lengths and dramas if this MC had gone straight to the point from the beginning, instead he kept speaking in some kind of syllable-form. Just saying 🤷, but I like the story so far
"I told you that he died remember?" He asked Alice and she bit her lips trying to stop herself from doing something stupid.
Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
This the first time I've heard someone or any author call SPACE a 'basic' element. A bit intriguing 🤔
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Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
I don't understand how this MC fits into what he's been portrayed as — Dark Lord who are meant to be enemies of Heroes, and should kill them for more rewards and skills. Also, this guy started listening to the opinions of his captive, also turning kinda beta in the process .🤦♂️😞😮💨
Ethan nodded, then got dressed and walked to the side of the wooden bed, stroking Mia's hair, and said, "Then you rest well today, are you hungry? I'm going to cook some food for you."
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
Global demon King: Starting as the Abyssal Dragon?
Unfortunately, although these rays of light were colorful, human with the naked eye could not tell their quality.
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
But here's a hidden plot within this plot — A mad scientist eventually captures him and performs multiple experiments on him, instead of gaining results, he unexpectedly turned Chu Bai into a powerful Chimaera or made him more Powerful or related stuff. Just saying🤷 But then, people might be like " Why should he be brought back into the story", Well, probably because the heavenly Dao couldn't stand the villain making more progress and getting more powerful, so it decided to use a discarded pawn. Interesting right?
Qian Jun didn't mind adding fuel to the fire and anonymously passing on the news that would shock these mad scientists.
Urban · Spirit_Immortal
I thought this guy came from a rich background, always receiving a huge amount of pocket money, to the extent that he could spend them extravagantly. So why would he intentionally get involved in such illegal stuff? Also, no one should bring up useless reasons like "He did it to gain recognition " and so many other reasons; he clearly said it in the paragraph — he's doing it to sell them for money. Just saying 🤷
"Copy the calligraphy and paintings of famous masters and sell them for money."
Urban · Spirit_Immortal
I don't know if you're being sarcastic or what? But I clearly understand that that action of his was out of stupid impulse. One should understand that in his previous, he couldn't even understand or perceive who was his enemy or loyal friend, like in the case of his girlfriend. Also, he was a loyal admirer of that Pink Lotus girl in his previous life. So this all, were the reasons why he couldn't quite comport himself, making his character unstable. This were one of the reasons why he couldn't stick to his character and promises he made to hide his identity, and ended up exposing his real life name and identity to that Pink Lotus girl in real life, leading to his identity being leaked and got targeted by some forces in real life. Even the author said it, that when he added that Pink Lotus girl as a friend in the game, he was so overjoyed that he was almost skipping all the way in the forest. Isn't that a behavior one displays when the gets attention from his crush? Also don't try to say that he's trying to gain favor, because this guy kept doing simpy stuffs, even to the extent of selling his gold coins to her for a cheaper price that what it is being sold for in the black market, using an excuse of not wanting to reap her off. He even went on to tell her his real life name because he felt that as a popular and influential person in his previous life, she could be trust and can keep his secret. In a normal and logical life situation, would people trust figures like Drake, Taylor Swift, Ishowspeed, Messi and all other influential figures just because they are influential? Making her seem trustworthy just after two meetings is just heavy plot armor's work
He was secretly always worried about his friend who was immature beyond belief .... he was talented but overall a complete idiot. But that seemed to change today.
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
Okay
Qian Jun rubbed his temples. What kind of brain-paralyzed lackey was this? How can he even came to this conclusion.
Urban · Spirit_Immortal
Considering that you came from modern world, and that you're a transmigrator, how can you take someone like this as your lackey?
Qian Jun rubbed his temples. What kind of brain-paralyzed lackey was this? How can he even came to this conclusion.
Urban · Spirit_Immortal
No... Personally, I feel that their current situation shouldn't call for such prolonged twists and turns; he should have at least gone a bit straight to the point, instead he kept talking in riddles and stuff. Think about it logically, if it were in real life, you might not (even I) have the patience to keep listening to such riddle-like, twists and turns, conversation. Although the information he fed her at the beginning might be important, they weren't needed at that moment; he should've gotten a bit straight to the point, and later on break things down for her. But remember, all these are just minor mistakes, nothing serious😉
"I told you that he died remember?" He asked Alice and she bit her lips trying to stop herself from doing something stupid.
Primordial Soul's Rebirth
Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser