Gugjo

Review (up to chapter 23) The story is generally enjoyable, with character development that is genuinely good. The grammar is solid, with no major issues to mention. However, the update schedule for new chapters is inconsistent, which can be frustrating for readers. The biggest drawback is Chapters 2 and 3, which feel like unnecessary torture scenes. These chapters don't contribute much to the plot and may turn away potential readers. Fortunately, the story improves significantly after these chapters, but since first impressions matter, those early chapters might discourage new readers. On the flip side, those willing to push through might find the story more enjoyable as it progresses.