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Moments 3
Ret_Tri
It's so good to see a novel where the transmigrator simply accepts that he will never return to earth. Simply refreshing not to have to read 2 chapters worth of "oh is my sister going to be ok etc.".
Ret_Tri
I will never understand the point of including obviously dumb decisions by the MC. The Guy who recognizes his aura gets told to stfu. In the presence of Rank 4s he decides ... to run. Simply brain-dead. It adds nothing to his character nor does it make the story better in any way. Iris could have been introduced differently.
Good Story in theory. Especially like his quick acceptance & embrace of the new world. None of this "How do i get back to earth" garbage. But holy hell... 1. Too much repetition of text -> Whole paragraphs either paraphrased or copy pasted. 2. Too many flowery exchanges. Like I get Respect etc. but that's just rather excessively applied in this story. 3. The MC... The Dungeon Guardian explains how it works. Then at every!!! Trial he asks himself if the voice is the Master of the Dungeon. Like that's not good storytelling, that's just stretching the word count to infinity. 4. The amount of "Could it be..." etc is baffeling as well 5. Sees the FL in person. Asks himself where he heard the name before.. Like Seriously ?? Btw Answer would be less then a month ago. Story has potential but the way of writing is just so bad.
Primordial Star Scripture
Eastern · Lu Yao