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Well it was good but did not feel like enough was given barely know anything about any of the mc’s since it is already stopped at chap 20 and without enough story given and info no incentive is there to buy the chapters

So far really interesting and intriguing love the development of the story but the mc is kinda stupid hopefully he will get better. The grammar is good but there are some different names in different places. Still worth a read

I must be high but it’s almost like I’ve seen this twice before can’t put my finger on it though wtf is going on.

This is awesome book read all of it immediately after the first chapter, I was hooked and now want more. No grammatical errors, no events making me question what’s happening it’s all good!

Yes you’re right in the world expanding through Saki, and the info that is given is good. I’m just left with the questions of “how is this world similar previous world since the same people are there” or “how come Lyra got summoned there 8 years before Saki”. Which is good in developing the mystery of the Purple Apple. I shouldn’t have implied the whole world when saying little, the current info is great in the development of the world but when left with these questions makes the story confusing. But that might just be me. Really excited for what’s to come? (づ￣ ³￣)づ

The story is interesting up to this point. There is very little information about the world they are in, not sure if intentional or not but makes the story bland. The characters are interesting and if the story keeps updating… can lead to a very well put together novel. All in all, ok atm and am hoping for more!

Beautiful and want more the writing and the details are to the poi and don’t leave me confused and annoyed love this!

It’s really not as bad is originally thought the only problem was the ending of the first novel with a very unclear ending to it, I’m thankful to the author and the explanation but would have liked to figure it out in my own. Other than that very good so far mc isn’t dumb but does get annoying with this weird must take what I want and protect it personality.