It was a good chapter... except for the heat rays part. Those red eyes should have manifested a long time ago. Still it was a good chapter. Keep up the good work.
Ayo... What kind of condoms cost 169 dollars? Did he supposably buy gold-plated condoms?
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love your book so far man... keep up the good work
question... if his head is a skull... then how can a skull smile???
The Ghost Rider nodded at her request. Haley then gave him a weak smile and thanked him quietly. Turning around, he walked over to the nearest person in need. It was a woman, and she was stuck under a collapsed wall. Lifting the wall, he picked up the woman and gently let her down a few feet away.
TV · GAF_00_TW
the best way to describe the book would by saying it is different. When I read that there is an overpowered mc, i expected reading a book about those overpowered xinxia or wuxia Protagonist. But it is pretty different from those books. the mc is a villian through and through, and seems to be raising a typical Heroic Protagonist for his schemes. And seeing everything transpire from both perspective is very entertaining... I would recommend this book because not only it is good, but is different as well.
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*she would refer to phil as dad. Not by his name
"Phil had a kidney stone and the firemen came to take him to the hospital", she answered.
TV · N_R_U
*hungry
They all walked in silence to the Great Hall. Honestly, Harry was kinda hunger, but when they arrived, the entire room was busy staring at Longbottom. His crashing arrival the previous day was the talk of the school. For some reason, people seemed to admire him for it.
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
*old woman
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Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
remove inverted commas from 'he'
“S-Sounds fun,” Ethan replied. “He didn’t take the Potion Making Class because he wasn’t that good at memorizing things. Also, he didn’t have the patience to mix things together to try to create potions.
Fantasy · Elyon
Pro tip-- you could have written it like...he sat down, folding his legs..
Taking an Indian sitting posture he was ready to enter into meditation state, but stopped!.
HP: Magic Punk
Book&Literature · kamidemond