NanoLOA

Artefacts*

Another banger to let marinate, I hope this one doesn’t get dropped like a lot other Gojo esc MHA fics.

Outright TAKING others abilities is NOT common in fanfiction man 💀

Ima need 400 chapters on this one too boss, gonna let it marinate though.

Finally, I don’t know why people don’t use abilties like All For One more often. Gonna let this marinate for a while though.

Honestly man it had a great start, especially the gladiator training arc, then the downwards spiral started when you introduced the mask that hides his identity. From then on he started to devolve as a character, you portrayed him as a character hardened from his time as a gladiator, then turn around and create scenes like the first time he went Into the host of fertility, completely ruining his image. Dont get me started on the secret identity. He takes on the identity of “Gudao” for absolutely no reason. Since Mama Mia can literally see through the mask as stated since she’s a level 5-6. You did great introducing underrated characters like Aphrodite and Ocs like Amaterasu but it’s like after chapter 1-2 you forgot that he’s in the Danmachi world. Then for some inane reason I don’t stick around to find out about you make him introduce Bell to Freya???? I admittedly dropped right there so I have no reason why. But even if there was a reason why, I seriously doubt that it’s a good reason. His character is completely inconsistent and honestly NOT fun to read about at all. You shouldn’t waste your time on this fic. It’s a waste if potential.

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