Not sure if this is weird to ask, but could you tell me what about him makes him predictable. I haven’t been updating the fanfic because I wanted feedback. I want to improve my writing, so if you could tell me what you dislike about the MC then it’ll help me write better and make it more enjoyable to read. Thank you🤧
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It didn’t rlly leave any actual damage, it just hurt in the moment, Getting your shoulder dug into doesn’t feel the best😭
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I still don’t see how Jeanne wouldn’t be able to feel anything when someone’s gripping her shoulders, regardless of strength
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But my guy Jeanne right now is around 48kg so I don’t think she’d have the strength to just not feel anything
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She doesn’t have her servant stats, anybody can grab someone’s shoulders and squeeze and they’d atleast feel something.
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She hasn’t really undergone anything that would make her otherwise yet, she’s just lived a peaceful farmlife up til now
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F would be the average human, F- being slightly below, and F+ being above average with E being 10x human level so E- would be around 5x a human, that’s how i’ll interpret it atleast
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You can be stronger then someone and still be hurt by them.
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Oki doki, I’ll start working on it❤️
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Hi, author here, I’m sorry for not updating chapters. I’ve been thinking about how I want the story to change and what the future arcs will be like. I’ve also been really lazy. Chapters should resume daily posting from now on, and I’ll try to post multipe chapters a day to make up for the days I didn’t upload. Thanks.❤️ -Author