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"We own land?" Henry asked, astonished. I knew the feeling. "Why are we just now learning this? Can we see where it is?" I inquired. Dad blushed, "Sure." He got up and went upstairs. After he came back, he set a paper map down, pointing at a red mark. We looked at the mark in silence. Our jaws dropped. I looked at Dad, then Henry, then back at the map. "We own this," Henry asked unsure. Dad cleared his throat, "Yes. The blue dot is where the house is."

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Fantasy · BreathlessWriter

"We own land?" Henry asked, astonished. I knew the feeling. "Why are we just now learning this? Can we see where it is?" I inquired. Dad blushed, "Sure." He got up and went upstairs. After he came back, he set a paper map down, pointing at a red mark. We looked at the mark in silence. Our jaws dropped. I looked at Dad, then Henry, then back at the map. "We own this," Henry asked unsure. Dad cleared his throat, "Yes. The blue dot is where the house is."

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Fantasy · BreathlessWriter

"We own land?" Henry asked, astonished. I knew the feeling. "Why are we just now learning this? Can we see where it is?" I inquired. Dad blushed, "Sure." He got up and went upstairs. After he came back, he set a paper map down, pointing at a red mark. We looked at the mark in silence. Our jaws dropped. I looked at Dad, then Henry, then back at the map. "We own this," Henry asked unsure. Dad cleared his throat, "Yes. The blue dot is where the house is."

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Fantasy · BreathlessWriter

"But remember," I continued, my tone becoming more serious, "with great power comes great responsibility. We need to learn how to control and use your magic wisely. We don't want to draw unnecessary attention or cause harm unintentionally."

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Fantasy · BreathlessWriter