Carromanja

1 years ago

Commented

Human I suppose

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Carromanja

1 years ago

Commented

Corrupt troopers

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Carromanja

1 years ago

Commented

Boy x bouly? Or boy x Girl? Varis surelly a boy name

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Carromanja

1 years ago

Commented

That human for you, Witch

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Carromanja

1 years ago

Commented

Where his father and mother?

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Carromanja

1 years ago

Posted

I just read 10 chapter and it well crafted story. But, it felt weird, when you skip the time. From eigh years biy to mature seventeen on one chapter. But its okay, i still enjoyed thia nivel si far.

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Carromanja

1 years ago

Commented

That bad guy must pay dearly!

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Carromanja

1 years ago

Commented

What is tuxedo?

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Carromanja

1 years ago

Commented

Ouh they friendship is so weet

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