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My life as a reborn monster
Fantasy · Forsakenneel
Dust domain
She followed the words in her mind. Her light domain field had already detected some small drones inching toward this place and it would seem they have detected something odd in this inn.
In the mind of an NPC
Fantasy · GoGo
Jade can be white
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The Human Giant
Fantasy · Mr_Palados
You know you can delete comments and re-type them
"Heyy," I unexpectedly hear the boy beside me say, turning my head towards him to find him staring at me with his strikingly attractive deep blue eyes,
A Villain's Guide to World Domination
Fantasy · Arrc_
The cringe is probably referring to pati’s fear of cockroaches and small bugs. As for the grammar, can’t really be specific because it’s an “overall” thing. Granted, your grammar isn’t the worse around but it can be improved.
It more like “ why are we protecting the military”.
"Well, I can't just choose or focus on one, I have to try them all to see which one is the most enjoyable. Though I can't help but admit that I'm a bit biased to Hunter. What exactly do the Vampires of Lux need defending from anyway?" he asked. "But there we go, sent an application–and huh, summoned already."
Vampire Nightlife
Urban · Foncee_Cehl
When something is good(like this story) ppl want more of it. I.e longer chapters, more chapters
Why would a slime come from an egg? The reproduce by cell division.
My life as a reborn monster
Fantasy · Forsakenneel