Bruno_oliveira

Bruno_oliveira

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2022-12-07 Joined Brazil
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Bruno_oliveira
Bruno_oliveira
9 months ago
Replied to Darkness_Enjoyer

The real criticism isn't even much about the characters, after all they are from a game that was inspired by a novel. The fact that the description is very overwhelming makes it almost impossible to read, I'm currently in the part where he leaves school for the first dungeon, if I'm not mistaken I'm going to the 4th chapter for him to actually enter the dungeon, the description of the black market, totally overwhelming , the constant focus on wanting to demonstrate that the MC is an observer, goes far beyond making the story complicated to read. Until now I wonder if it deserved almost an entire chapter just to show the MC walking around in the black market.

Bruno_oliveira
Bruno_oliveira
9 months ago
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I thought I was being boring while reading, but when I saw many comments I realized that most people think that way. 1st The author, to increase the chapter, gets lost a lot in useless things, using his Observation skill as an excuse, he even mentions sweat. 2nd The author loses himself in making characters alive, no matter what world you are in, even the weakest and slowest ones, will have a group, I know that the previous owner of the body avoided this so he isolated himself, but the fact that basically everyone including the teachers, who so far in chapter 30 has not been shown any reason for this to be the case, why would a teacher, an old person with life experience, waste his time trying to belittle a student, what a weak characterization. 3rd Seriously, author, 30 chapters to tell just 3 effective days of history, and in those 3 days nothing happened, which deserves the focus on the story... 4th In 30 chapters he does not mention any fact that gives him a reason to keep a low profile, on the contrary, from what was mentioned when the characters from the main cast talked, if he shows progress he would get a better and more reserved place to train, As quoted by the Protagonist of the original story, within 30 days you will already have the availability to train in better and separate rooms.

Bruno_oliveira
Bruno_oliveira
1 years ago
Replied to TymSpiritwolf

The duel involves many more things for Jon, such as testing himself, training, and in his case, gaining prominence

With a challenging look, Nolan, now losing patience and composure, suggested, "How about we settle this in the arena? A duel, right here, right now. Let's see if you're truly worthy of standing by Elara's side."

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Rebirth in a Favorite RPG

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Bruno_oliveira
Bruno_oliveira
1 years ago
Replied to Pedro_Sousa

and because it is a sword

Bruno_oliveira
Bruno_oliveira
Bruno_oliveira
1 years ago
Replied to TymSpiritwolf

True... My Bad

"Have you been waiting long? Hey, Jon... Earth to Jon." Elara couldn't help but be amused by Jon's reaction upon seeing her, but all she showed was a triumphant smile.

Rebirth in a Favorite RPG

Rebirth in a Favorite RPG

Fantasy · Bruno_oliveira

Bruno_oliveira
Bruno_oliveira
1 years ago
Replied to TymSpiritwolf

Maybe he just denied the obvious? Sometimes we do this for comfort

As the sun began to set, Gwen bid Jon farewell as if it were one of their usual goodbyes. However, Jon felt that something was different. Before walking away, Gwen hugged and kissed him one more time. The kiss was slow, laden with deep emotions and feelings. After that day, Jon felt genuinely happy, aware that his relationship with Gwen had transcended mere friendship, even though he was usually slow to pick up on such emotional nuances. However, Gwen never returned to Riverwood...

Rebirth in a Favorite RPG

Rebirth in a Favorite RPG

Fantasy · Bruno_oliveira

Bruno_oliveira
Bruno_oliveira
1 years ago
Replied to AlfDeT_Valedstorm

thanks

Bruno_oliveira
Bruno_oliveira
1 years ago
Replied to AGcuevax

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Bruno_oliveira
Bruno_oliveira
1 years ago
Replied to AlfDeT_Valedstorm

"It's just that I do everything in Portuguese and then I have to use ChatGPT to translate it into English. And since I'm terrible at English, it's difficult. Please let me know if you notice something like that <3."

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