Zonum

It looks promising, but we still have to see if the author will keep the level high. I like the mc already

writing quality: topworldbuilding: magicalMC: intresting story development: totally originalGreat job!

Some grammatical mistakes here and there, but overally a great job with above average writing style. Characters are nice and improve later in the novel as the author is learning. Free and previous chapters frequently rewritten for consistency. I recommend this.