thanks
I'm going to just say this am still a noob writer so don't expect a mountain out of me but I'm not saying you can't criticize just put that as a consideration ,and oh the protagonist will be invisible but the emphasis on his strength will only be in the beginning chapters after that , not much maybe once a while and oh this is just a heads up he is reborn in a world like ours and I am going to say this I'm not going to focus the the characters from one nation
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Its an Statement, its means its something he is saying out loud . i will try not to make it that way
Really i may not have said it in the right way but
Eh ๐ i don't know if what i am thinking is what you are thinking but if it is yes
you should work your grammar use commas are you at war with commas use it bra
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sorry I apologize I wasn't aware of this I will try and structure my grammar better, sorry for that I humbly request you forgive that mistake
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yea I was trying to make it funny , not to serious should I keep it that way
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ok sorry about that I will implement it from now
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๐ ๐ญ๐ธ ๐ช๐ฌ๐ฝ๐พ๐ช๐ต๐ต๐ ๐ช๐ป๐ฎ ๐ฝ๐ฑ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฎ ๐ป๐ฎ๐บ๐พ๐ฒ๐ป๐ฎ๐ถ๐ฎ๐ท๐ฝ๐ผ ๐ ๐ถ๐พ๐ผ๐ฝ ๐ถ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฝ
if I gave him things like ability to erase the universe the story won't go on. plus that is not actually his ability his real power I gave him is kinda unusual but just read you will understand. As for the number 1 power it is somehow similar to conqueror haki I guess
" now I know you may see my choice as stupid and may have better choices but I went with what I could think of , hmm firstly I went the ability to release an enormous amount of power from my body , second was an ability to completely reflect the intention of my enemy , third I went with the ability to become intangible , fourth I went with the ability of the greatest anime ehm sorry I mean my favorite character Satoru Gojo I asked for the passive ability infinity for those who don't know ,you guys must have been living under a shell but if you were to broke to watch him in action sorry dudes and dudets , now for my fifth ability I chose the ability of Beelzebub to instantly swallow all hehe I know maybe I was greedy with this one , then last but not least I chose eternal youth , only a dummy would pick Immortality but I am not one of them I am smart I don't want to living forever looking like a turtle "
Reborn as a God in a fantasy world
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